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Many customs and traditional behaviours are no longer required in the modern society and therefore they are not worth keeping To what extent do you agree or disagree v.1

Many customs and traditional behaviours are no longer required in the modern society and therefore they are not worth keeping v. 1
Online forums and review sections are increasingly becoming part of the e-commerce websites. Where customers can submit their feedback about a certain product or service. While some people believe that it harms the image of a company, I personally argue that it helps the customer to choose the right product or seller. The prime disadvantage of online forums is the bogus reviews, which are given just to damage the reputation of a brand or company. In the absence of any authority on most of the platforms, anyone can anonymously leave a bad comment. However, companies are working to resolve this certain issue to make reviews and feedbacks more authentic. For instance, Amazon, nowadays, allows only the registered customers to leave the review or comment. Having said that, I believe that, the feedback sections help customers to choose the right brand or service provider. People often leave their positive or negative reviews after using a product. This gives the potential customer an idea whether the product or service will fulfil their demand or not. Besides, it also tells about the quality of the service being provided. For instance, before ordering food from Zomato, a food ordering platform, I often go through the reviews for the restaurant or outlet. Simply, these reviews try to build trust among customers and sellers. In conclusion, fake comments are a negative aspect of online forums. However, the way it helps to build trust is the reason because of which I agree that this is the positive development.
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sections are
increasingly
becoming part of the e-commerce websites. Where
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customers
can submit their feedback about a certain
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product
or
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service
. While
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some
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people
believe that it harms the image of a
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company
, I
personally
argue that it
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helps
the
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customer
to choose the right
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product
or seller.

The prime disadvantage of online forums is the bogus
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reviews
, which are
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given
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just
to damage the reputation of a brand or
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company
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reviews
and feedbacks more authentic.
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review
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help
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customers
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. This gives the potential
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before
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Zomato
, a food ordering platform, I
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often
go through the
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reviews
for the restaurant or outlet.
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, these
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reviews
try to build trust among
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customers
and sellers.

In conclusion
, fake comments are a
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negative
aspect of online forums.
However
, the way it
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helps
to build trust is the reason
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agree
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positive
development.
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IELTS essay Many customs and traditional behaviours are no longer required in the modern society and therefore they are not worth keeping v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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