From the time being, unhealthy habit of children is tough tasks for both schools and parents. However, this negative lifestyle is also cause by other sides. In my view, I partly agree with this statement and I will give my reasons.
On the one hand, responsible of the schools and parents lead to how the youngsters behave. Firstly, the schools should create more physical clubs for the children such as like football or volleyball team. This is because they can develop the physical health due to exercise. In particular, they can avoid gluing their eyes to the screen all days without studying. Secondly, attention should be paid more to the children by their parents. Parents must not allow their kids eat too much junk foods because it cause many negative consequences. Youngster should be given a rule of using advance technologies in specific of time.
On the other hand, sedentary lifestyle of pupils is caused by many aspects. The main reason is that their awareness have a hug e impact on their lifestyles. They have enough knowledge to tell apart good and bad habits. For example, they can choose to play tranditional games instead of staying indoor all the time. Besides, the government play important role to form their lifestyle. Local authorities shoud creat social activities the children during the summer time for the children. Therefore, they can have more chance to take up a new interest and creat new habit.
In conclusion, while parents and schools play a important role to develop children’s habits, I believe that they can form a good lifestyle by their own due to their ability and knowledge.
From the time being, unhealthy habit of
children
is tough tasks for both
schools
and
parents
.
However
, this
negative
lifestyle
is
also
cause
by other sides. In my view, I partly
agree
with this statement and I will give my reasons.
On the one hand,
responsible of
the
schools
and
parents
lead to how the youngsters behave.
Firstly
, the
schools
should create more physical clubs for the
children
such as like football or volleyball team. This is
because
they can develop the physical health due to exercise.
In particular
, they can avoid gluing their eyes to the screen all days without studying.
Secondly
, attention should
be paid
more to the
children
by their
parents
.
Parents
must
not
allow
their kids eat too much junk foods
because
it
cause
many
negative
consequences. Youngster should be
given
a
rule
of using advance technologies in specific of time.
On the other hand
, sedentary
lifestyle
of pupils
is caused
by
many
aspects. The main reason is that their awareness have a hug e impact on their
lifestyles
. They have
enough
knowledge to
tell
apart
good
and
bad
habits.
For example
, they can choose to play
tranditional
games
instead
of staying indoor all the time.
Besides
, the
government
play
important
role to form their
lifestyle
. Local authorities
shoud
creat
social activities the
children
during the
summer time
for the
children
.
Therefore
, they can have more chance to take up a new interest and
creat
new habit.
In conclusion
, while
parents
and
schools
play
a
important
role to develop
children’s
habits, I believe that they can form a
good
lifestyle
by their
own
due to their ability and knowledge.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes