It is true fact that it is irrefutable fact that a significant number of parents advised their children to do part time job in their leisure time. Although many may see is as positive phenomena, it is not a trend without drawbacks. Both the merits and demerits will be discussed before a reasonable conclusion is reached.
The first and foremost advantage is that if they work hard to earn their own money, they learn the value of money and know how to spend and where to spend? Moreover, it will help them to manage their account in the future.
The Second advantage is that part time job is the best way the make them busy in their free time so that they spend whole vacant time in learning something new on the job. Nowadays, young mind mostly spends their free time in using social media, watching inappropriate videos, many of them start taking harmful drugs which affect their physical Growth. Playing harmful games that are dangerous for the brain and eyes? For example, In 2018 India did a survey in which they compared the physical growth of children who use to play more computer games with who do not and results showed 82% of children’s who are addicted to games are mentally weak. Moreover, they get a chance to work with skilled professionals and learn moral values, punctuality, time management and many important values which help them in future.
On the other hand, inspiring children for a short time work in their leisure time also have some negative aspect as it may affect their physical as well as mental growth. They do study for long hours in school and after that if they will do the job? Become a hectic schedule which affects their health. They must have time to play and spend with peers. Beside this, spending whole the day away from the family may affect their heritage values.
After analysing both the views I am of the opinion that Motivating children to make them busy is good it will save them from bad habits but part time job is not a good idea. Parents ask them to help them in their work rather than asking for the job. So that they will spend time with parents, and also get time to play with peers.
It is true fact that it is irrefutable fact that a significant number of parents advised their
children
to do part
time
job
in their leisure
time
. Although
many may
see
is as
positive
phenomena, it is not a trend without drawbacks. Both the merits and demerits will
be discussed
before
a reasonable conclusion
is reached
.
The
first
and foremost advantage is that if they
work
hard
to earn their
own
money, they learn the value of money and know how to
spend
and where to
spend
?
Moreover
, it will
help
them to manage their account in the future.
The Second advantage is that part
time
job
is the best way the
make
them busy in their free
time
so
that they
spend
whole vacant
time
in learning something new on the
job
. Nowadays, young mind
mostly
spends
their free
time
in using social media, watching inappropriate videos,
many
of them
start
taking harmful drugs which
affect
their physical Growth. Playing harmful games that are
dangerous
for the brain and eyes?
For example
, In 2018 India did a survey in which they compared the physical growth of
children
who
use to
play more computer games with
who
do not and results
showed
82% of
children’s
who
are addicted
to games are mentally weak.
Moreover
, they
get
a chance to
work
with skilled professionals and learn moral values, punctuality,
time
management and
many
important
values which
help
them
in future
.
On the other hand
, inspiring
children
for a short
time
work
in their leisure
time
also
have
some
negative
aspect as it may
affect
their physical
as well
as mental growth. They do study for long hours in school and after that if they will do the
job
? Become a hectic schedule which
affects
their health. They
must
have
time
to play and
spend
with peers. Beside this, spending whole the day away from the family may
affect
their heritage values.
After
analysing
both the views I am of the opinion that Motivating
children
to
make
them busy is
good
it will save them from
bad
habits
but
part
time
job
is not a
good
idea
. Parents ask them to
help
them in their
work
rather
than asking for the
job
.
So
that they will
spend
time
with parents, and
also
get
time
to play with peers.
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