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Living in a country where you to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement v.2

Living in a country where you to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what what extent v. 2
I am a working lady and work at Saudi Arabia. Before applying this job I was felling happy to get a chance residing in Saudi Arabia because being a Muslim, I have a opportunity to visit Holy places like Makkah and Madina. So, when I have get this job and shifted in Saudi Arabia, I have face many problems like cultural, social and language. Locals of Saudi Arabia are very friendly and give a warm welcome to internationals who is coming to other contries as a tourists or workers, employees etc. My initial days in office are pleasant but passage of time, I feel lonely and quit, due to language bearer. The locals of Saudia always speake their local language like Arabic, but I have no grift on Arabic, due to this I cannot talk to locals in free time to build freiendship. Locals of Saudi Arabia never change this habbit of speaking local language in other countries. Even, Saudi Govt officials visits the Pakistan and other country, they deliver their speeches in Arabic not in Englosh or other languages. Due to such language bearer, I have face practical problem to learning, question and answers and explanations. I respect the locals of Saudi Arabia for promoting their culture and how consist on their principles or conventions or customs. But I have feel bad for international, who are working in Saudia and students etc, they cannot speak in Arabic and face many hurdles in staring time. So, Saudia want to adopt English as a official language and due to this no one in trouble when he want to travel in Saudia or work in Saudi Arabia.
I am a working lady and work at Saudi Arabia.
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Before
applying this job I was felling happy to
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get
a chance residing in Saudi Arabia
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because
being a Muslim, I have
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a
opportunity to visit Holy places like
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Makkah
and
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Madina
.
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So
, when I have
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get
this job and shifted in Saudi Arabia, I have
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face
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many
problems like cultural, social and language.

Locals of Saudi Arabia are
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very
friendly and give a warm welcome to internationals who
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is
coming to
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other
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contries
as
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a tourists
or workers, employees etc. My initial days in office are pleasant
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but
passage of time, I feel lonely and quit, due to
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language
bearer. The
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locals
of
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Saudia
always
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speake
their
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local
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language
like Arabic,
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but
I have no
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grift
on Arabic, due to this I cannot talk to
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locals
in free time to build
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freiendship
.
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Locals
of Saudi Arabia never
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change
this
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habbit
of speaking
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local
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language
in
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other
countries. Even, Saudi Govt officials visits the Pakistan and
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other
country, they deliver their speeches in Arabic not in
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Englosh
or
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other
languages.

Due to such
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language
bearer, I have face practical problem to learning, question and answers and explanations. I respect the
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locals
of Saudi Arabia for promoting their culture and how consist on their principles or conventions or customs.
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But
I have feel
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bad
for international, who are working in
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Saudia
and students etc, they cannot speak in Arabic and face
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many
hurdles in staring time.
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So
,
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Saudia
want to adopt English as
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a
official
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language
and due to this no one in trouble when he
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want
to travel in
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Saudia
or work in Saudi Arabia.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what what extent v. 2

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
275 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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