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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. v.8

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. v. 8
Living in a foreign country is both an interesting and challenging experience. I do agree that serious social and practical problems are very likely to occur, however, they can totally be avoided if we try to learn and respect each other's country cultures. On the one hand, there are several difficulties when living in a foreign country. The social problem most people have to face is the language barrier, which means a person can not understand or speak the language of the country he lives in. The lack of understanding without verbal communication is quite troublesome as it may lead to miscomprehension or confusions. Furthermore, in some cases, due to cultural difference, one can accidentally offend the locals with inappropriate behavior and word and therefore makes things complicated. For instance, the French often greet others by kissing on both cheeks while in some Asian countries this kind of action may be impolite or even considered sexual harassment. For practical issue, it would be about finding a job. It is hard to find a well-paid job because many companies put the priority of hiring the native over the immigrant, and it is harder if the person is not fluent in the local language. On the other hand, those disadvantages mentioned above might not be as serious as we think. The first reason is that the difference in behavior is understandable and can be forgiven by the native. The second is one should do research and learn about the culture and customs of his living-in country to prevent misunderstandings. If the person is open-minded and tolerant enough, the challenges of accommodating in a foreign country will be solved little by little. To summarize, I partially agree that an individual's life can be affected by social and practical problems if living abroad that differs in language, but most problems are not unnecessarily severe should he had fully prepared.
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is both an interesting and challenging experience. I do
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that serious social and practical
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if we try to learn and respect each other's
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cultures.

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. The social
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problem
most
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people
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have to
face is the language barrier, which means a person can not understand or speak the language of the
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he
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in. The lack of understanding without verbal communication is quite troublesome as it may lead to
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miscomprehension
or confusions.
Furthermore
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some
cases, due to cultural difference, one can
accidentally
offend the locals with inappropriate behavior and word and
therefore
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makes
things complicated.
For instance
, the French
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often
greet others by kissing on both cheeks while in
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some
Asian
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countries
this kind of action may be impolite or even considered sexual harassment. For practical issue, it would be about finding a job. It is
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hard
to find a well-paid job
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because
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companies
put the priority of hiring the native over the immigrant, and it is harder if the person is not fluent in the local language.

On the other hand
, those disadvantages mentioned above might not be as serious as we
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. The
first
reason is that the difference in behavior is understandable and can
be forgiven
by the native. The second is one should do research and learn about the culture and customs of his living-in
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country
to
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prevent
misunderstandings. If the person is open-minded and tolerant
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enough
, the challenges of accommodating in a foreign
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will
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little
by
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little
.

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partially
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that an individual's life can be
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affected
by social and practical
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problems
if living abroad that differs in language,
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but
most
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problems
are not
unnecessarily
severe should he had
fully
prepared.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
315 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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