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libraries should be replaced by computers discuss pros cons and your opinion v.1

libraries should be replaced by computers discuss pros cons and your opinion v. 1
In modernization, computers replaced by libraries. Libraries are the main source for the people who want to learn. In this essay, we highlight the key features of the pros and cons of libraries. The globalization brings a part of the change in the world. One of the major change came into technology, whereas the thinking machine is important for every human being thus PC work is a fast and easy process. Now everyone busy in their life, no one has time to go to libraries or spend a piece of time. Area of positive thing is there regarding the digital device. The technology shows us a portion of books in one click and that without searching a lot. Book expenditure gets less due to the electronic device. We get a lot of information, articles report on specific topics. As long as an internet connection is running throughout the day so there is no need to worry about library time. On the hand libraries hold a better place for study, firstly it has a lot of books and articles which are written by great authors moreover, who want to study in a quiet place for them libraries are a best for study. To conclude, my strong opinion about it that libraries should be replaced by computers because it gives online information so rapidly due to which we get data so fast.
In modernization, computers replaced by libraries. Libraries are the main source for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who want to learn. In this essay, we highlight the key features of the pros and cons of libraries.

The globalization brings a part of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in the world. One of the major
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
came into technology, whereas the thinking machine is
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important
for every human being
thus
PC work is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
and easy process.
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Now
everyone busy in their life, no one has time to go to libraries or spend a piece of time. Area of
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positive
thing is there regarding the digital device. The technology
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shows
us a portion of books in one click and that without searching a lot. Book expenditure
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gets
less due to the electronic device. We
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get
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a lot of
information, articles report on specific topics.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
long as an internet connection is running throughout the day
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so
there is no need to worry about library time.

On the hand libraries hold a better place for study,
firstly
it has
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a lot of
books and articles which
are written
by great authors
moreover
, who want to study in a quiet place for them libraries are
Use "the" with the superlative.
a
best for study.

To conclude
, my strong opinion about it that libraries should
be replaced
by computers
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because
it gives online information
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so
rapidly
due to which we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
data
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
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fast
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay libraries should be replaced by computers discuss pros cons and your opinion v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
230 words
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