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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. v.9

Study of mother tongue is not important. But the English language are very salutable subject in school. In my view this is wrong, I am always ready to learn both language. Firstly, English language is international language all type of people learn that language. When schools are provided a good label for English. But all student are read English, writing English & speak English to adjust time, because they go to higher education when there only learn & study to english, so this is important that high reason. Secondly, local language when talk about India. That country are different types of states or there are provided different types of language. There people studied in local school. And learn mother tongue. Some high value of local language is very simplicity nor people like English language. After they go to higher study they don't know English while they don't complete their studies. In my view, school like local and international both are teach their student of the importance of both language. When student go to outside of their accommodation they don't feel unique. Because that student already learn about both language. Some time they feel guilty because they don't know English language and after they commit suicide. In conclude, the Government of study management take the all local private school and the give importance about learn for their school owners. Come out new rules for study's both language for student future life.
Study
of mother tongue is not
important
.
But
the English
language
are
very
salutable
subject in
school
. In my view this is
wrong
, I am always ready to
learn
both language.

Firstly
, English
language
is international
language
all type of
people
learn
that
language
. When
schools
are provided
a
good
label for English.
But
all
student
are read
English, writing English & speak English to adjust time,
because
they go to higher education when there
only
learn
&
study
to
english
,
so
this is
important
that high reason.

Secondly
,
local
language
when talk about India. That country are
different
types of states or there
are provided
different
types of
language
. There
people
studied in
local
school
. And
learn
mother tongue.
Some
high value of
local
language
is
very
simplicity nor
people
like English
language
. After they go to higher
study
they
don't
know English while they
don't
complete their studies.

In my view,
school
like
local
and international both are
teach
their
student
of the importance of both
language
.
When
student
go to outside
of their accommodation they
don't
feel unique.
Because
that
student
already
learn
about both
language
.
Some
time they feel guilty
because
they
don't
know English
language
and after they commit suicide.

In conclude, the
Government
of
study
management take the all
local
private
school
and the give importance about
learn
for their
school
owners.
Come
out new
rules
for study's both
language
for
student
future life.
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IELTS essay Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

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