Some people think that violence related movies and computer games should be banned as it has a bad effect on the society but others say there is nothing like that. It helps people to refresh their mind after the hectic schedule of the day. I believe vulgar content should be definitely censored in order to make a better community to live in.
Undoubtedly, films and games are the source of entertainment for most of the individuals. This has greatly affected the lifestyle of people. For instance, whenever people get free time they just glue themselves in front of the television to watch movies or on the phone to play games for their enjoyment. They find all these a way of relaxation.
Nevertheless, its demerits far outweigh its merits. Most important of them all is non-violence shows have a very adverse effect on the society especially on youngsters. They get indulge in more criminal activities by watching the vulgar content in the movies. According to a statistics released by the Department of Crime, crime is increased 15 times more as compared to the past and 75% young ones are involved in it.
Furthermore, People are addicted nowadays towards playing games on the mobile phones or computer. For instance, PUBG game was in trend in the past few days. This was a challenge based game and people love to play it, most importantly, children. One of the challenges in the game also forced the people to die. In my hometown, I heard the number of cases of death due to this game only.
Clearly, violent films and games should be banned as it causes harm to society very badly. For the entertainment purpose people have other things to do like outdoor activities.
Some
people
think
that violence related movies and computer
games
should
be banned
as it has a
bad
effect on the society
but
others say there is nothing like that. It
helps
people
to refresh their mind after the hectic schedule of the day. I believe vulgar content should be definitely censored in order to
make
a better community to
live
in.
Undoubtedly
, films and
games
are the source of entertainment for most of the individuals. This has
greatly
affected
the lifestyle of
people
.
For instance
, whenever
people
get
free time they
just
glue themselves in front of the television to
watch
movies or on the phone to play
games
for their enjoyment. They find all these a way of relaxation.
Nevertheless
, its demerits far outweigh its merits. Most
important
of them all is non-violence
shows
have a
very
adverse effect on the society
especially
on youngsters. They
get
indulge in more criminal activities by watching the vulgar content in the movies. According to a statistics released by the Department of Crime, crime
is increased
15 times more
as
compared to the past and 75% young ones
are involved
in it.
Furthermore
,
People
are addicted
nowadays towards playing
games
on the mobile phones or computer.
For instance
, PUBG game was in trend in the past few days. This was a challenge based game and
people
love
to play it, most
importantly
, children. One of the challenges in the game
also
forced the
people
to
die
. In my hometown, I heard the number of cases of death due to this game
only
.
Clearly
, violent films and
games
should
be banned
as it causes harm to society
very
badly
. For the entertainment purpose
people
have other things to do like outdoor activities.
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13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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