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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? v.6

Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? v. 6
It is well known that English is an international language which is used as a primary language for education in almost all countries around the world. On top of that, teaching regional languages can help children to be a part of their society and culture in which they are born and brought up. Personally, I believe that while students need to learn English, the survival of regional languages is equally important. To begin with, English is the official language in more than 50 countries most of which are well-developed nations where one might be interested in settling down in the future. English speaking skills will come in handy in situations when you are trying to migrate abroad. In addition, the job opportunities for an individual with better English skills are numerous. The employers are only interested in those candidates who can have a good conversation with their clients and express their opinions fluently. This skill is extremely important in this age of globalization as the clients of the employers are often from different parts of the world. However, local languages have their own unique place in society. These languages help people maintain a separate identity. Language is the foundation of a culture and, in the absence of vernaculars, many cultures will disappear forever. People love songs, stories, books written in their own culture. In fact, many vernacular terms and words cannot be pronounced in the English language. In conclusion, English is an international language which is used as a primary language for education in almost all countries around the world. Moreover, I accept as true with that even as college students need to study English, the survival of local languages is equally important.
It is well known that English is an international
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language
which is
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used
as a primary
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language
for education in almost all countries around the world.
On top of that
, teaching regional
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languages
can
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help
children to be a part of their society and
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culture
in which they
are born
and brought up.
Personally
, I believe that while students need to learn English, the survival of regional
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languages
is
equally
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important
.

To
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begin
with, English is the official
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language
in more than 50 countries most of which are well-developed nations where one might
be interested
in settling down in the future.
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English speaking
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skills
will
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come
in handy in situations when you are trying to migrate abroad.
In addition
, the job opportunities for an individual with better English
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skills
are numerous. The employers are
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only
interested in those candidates who can have a
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good
conversation with their clients and express their opinions
fluently
. This
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skill
is
extremely
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important
in this age of globalization as the clients of the employers are
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often
from
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different
parts of the world.

However
, local
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languages
have their
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own
unique place in society. These
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languages
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help
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people
maintain a separate identity.
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Language
is the foundation of a
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culture
and, in the absence of vernaculars,
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many
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cultures
will disappear forever.
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People
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love
songs, stories, books written in their
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own
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culture
. In fact,
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many
vernacular terms and words cannot
be pronounced
in the English language.

In conclusion
, English is an international
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language
which is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
as a primary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
for education in almost all countries around the world.
Moreover
, I accept as true with that even as college students need to study English, the survival of local
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languages
is
equally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
Change your language and you change your thoughts.
Karl Albrecht

IELTS essay Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? v. 6

Essay
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4 paragraphs
283 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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