It is expected of the median standard of peoples' well-being to be lowered in the future. In this essay I am going to explain why I don not agree with this perspective.
Medicine and engineering are the greatest achievements of the human race. Therefore, the strength standards are increasing over time due to the current scientific advancement. In which medicine has a good share. Nations are built by the hands of men so the human power determines the influence of one country. Thus, governments do its best to make sure that their population is healthy. For example, increasing the number of public hospitals and the number of doctors working there. In addition, they are carrying out campaigns to increase the public awareness of the importance of well-being and how to establish good habits to protect the health.
On the other hand, youth is being brought up in a very modern, healthy way that makes sure that in the future when they be the ones responsible, children will perform well and spread this experience all around the globe. All of this plus the technological advancement and research will lead to increased health standards in the future. I believe in our ability to help each other, that we have kind hearts and that good people still exist working for the best for all the mankind.
In conclusion, medical service is a must for everyone. Luckily, it is improving over time as government bays it a huge attention and devotes its resources for the sake of our health
It is
expected
of the median standard of peoples' well-being to
be lowered
in the future. In this essay I am going to
explain
why I
don not
agree
with this perspective.
Medicine and engineering are the greatest achievements of the human race.
Therefore
, the strength standards are increasing over time due to the
current
scientific advancement. In which medicine has a
good
share. Nations
are built
by the hands of
men
so
the human power determines the influence of one country.
Thus
,
governments
do its best to
make
sure that their population is healthy.
For example
, increasing the number of public hospitals and the number of doctors working there.
In addition
, they are carrying out campaigns to increase the public awareness of the importance of well-being and how to establish
good
habits to protect the health.
On the other hand
, youth is
being brought
up in a
very
modern, healthy way that
makes
sure that in the future when they be the ones responsible, children will perform well and spread this experience all around the globe. All of this plus the technological advancement and research will lead to increased health standards in the future. I believe in our ability to
help
each other, that we have kind hearts and that
good
people
still
exist working for the best for all the mankind.
In conclusion
, medical service is a
must
for everyone. Luckily, it is improving over time as
government
bays it a huge attention and devotes its resources for the sake of our health
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