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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.9

Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. v. 9
The past is always past. Every one had mixed experiences in the past. However, few of the things will be useful to avoid failures in the future and others will be helpful for the refreshment in the present. I can agree with the consent to some level, Because of my experience there could be the items to move forward along with us. In this essay, I will explain about the thoughts which we need to carry? And which are not to carry? Based on my knowledge. I can decide these things into two categories. One is good things and other is bad things. Coming to good things are nothing but sweet memories. These memories we can carry along with our life cycle. Whenever we feel alone or get stressed, then we can memorize those feelings to get refreshment. For instance, In my life there were few memories which I am using to get relaxation from my very hectic busy schedule. Coming to the bad things, again, I will diverse these into two parts. One hand is the thing which we have to forget? And other hand is which we need to take along with us? Why I am asking to forget the little bad things are, they will cause more troubles for human life such as health and mental issues. Even the society will disturb with this. For example, There were many accidents happened every day in India. The majority of them are due to the human mistakes. Recently, There was an accident in Hyderabad with the driver mistake, but one person was dying without her involvement. Here the person, family, Who suffers with this accident have to leave the incident and have to start the new journey. The person who met the accident, he has to learn from this and use this to avoid more mistakes in the future. In conclusion, Even though it was a bad memory, sometimes it will be helpful to face the bad situation in the future. So the people have to decide depends on their situation and have to take some memories (good and bad) to lead the good life in the future.
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and others
will be helpful for the refreshment in the present. I can
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agree
with the consent to
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some
level,
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of my experience there could be the items to
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move
forward along with us. In this essay, I will
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explain
about the thoughts which we need to carry? And which are not to carry? Based on my knowledge.

I can decide these things into two categories. One is
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good
things and other is
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bad
things. Coming to
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good
things are nothing
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but
sweet
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memories
. These
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memories
we can carry along with our
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life
cycle. Whenever we feel alone or
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get
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stressed
, then we can memorize those feelings to
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get
refreshment.
For instance
, In my
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life
there were few
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memories
which I am using to
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get
relaxation from my
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very
hectic busy schedule.

Coming to the
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bad
things, again, I
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will diverse
these into two parts. One hand is the thing which we
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have to
forget? And other hand is which we need to take along with us? Why I am asking to forget the
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little
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bad
things are, they will cause more troubles for human
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life
such as health and mental issues. Even the society will disturb with this.
For example
, There were
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many
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accidents
happened every day in India. The majority of them are due to the human mistakes. Recently, There was an
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accident
in Hyderabad with the driver mistake,
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but
one person was dying without her involvement. Here the person, family, Who suffers with this
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accident
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have to
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leave
the incident and
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have to
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start
the new journey. The person who met the
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accident
, he
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learn from this and
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use
this to avoid more mistakes in the future.

In conclusion
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bad
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memory
,
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sometimes
it will be helpful to face the
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bad
situation in the future.
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the
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people
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decide depends on their situation and
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have to
take
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memories
(
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and
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bad)
to lead the
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good
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life
in the future.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. v. 9

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
359 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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