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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do u agree or disagree? v.8

Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. v. 8
It is argued that in the current age it is not beneficial to research about history. This essay completely disagrees with this statement and will discuss, why gaining knowledge about the history is valuable rather then invaluable, followed by a reasoned conclusion. It is a popular belief that past reflects the future. If decisions are made without researching the relevant former details and information, it may result in costly mistakes. For instance, Financial advisors predict the future profitability of a company by taking account of the historical data and facts as it helps them forecast the actual outcome. However, relying solely on historical facts and figures may produce incorrect results and may be misleading. Secondly, if enough time and resources are not invested in learning about the past, the current generation would not be able to benefit from the knowledge and wisdom of earlier generations. For example, A lot of research was done in the field of astronomy in the last five hundred years, It would be a very big mistake if current research does not benefit from the findings of that period. This is the reason that history is still taught as a subject in universities and schools. Although, some of the historical knowledge and wisdom may be termed as obsolete in today’s world. To conclude, I would say that it is not in the best interest of the current generation to ignore the lessons taught by history and our generation should learn about the lives and achievements of the earlier generations.
It
is argued
that in the
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current
age it is not beneficial to research about
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history
. This essay completely disagrees with this statement and will discuss, why gaining knowledge about the
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history
is valuable
rather
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then
invaluable, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

It is a popular belief that past reflects the future. If decisions
are made
without researching the relevant former
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details
and information, it may result in costly mistakes.
For instance
, Financial advisors predict the future profitability of a
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company
by taking account of the historical data and facts as it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
them forecast the actual outcome.
However
, relying
solely
on historical facts and figures may produce incorrect results and may be misleading.

Secondly
, if
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enough
time and resources are not invested in learning about the past, the
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current
generation would not be able to benefit from the knowledge and wisdom of earlier generations.
For example
,
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A lot of
research
was done
in the field of astronomy in the last five hundred years, It would be a
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very
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big
mistake if
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current
research does not benefit from the findings of that period. This is the reason that
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history
is
still
taught as a subject in universities and schools. Although,
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
historical knowledge and wisdom may
be termed
as obsolete in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
’s world.

To conclude
, I would say that it is not in the best interest of the
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current
generation to
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ignore
the lessons taught by
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history
and our generation should learn about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
and achievements of the earlier generations.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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