The statement states the old discussion of the role of nature and nurture. The first group believes that the innate capacities, inherited genes, or born talent play a key role in the professions like sports and performing arts such as music. It’s true that there are people who born with certain talents can perform exceptionally well in their fields. It’s also a general belief that musicians and artists are born with the ability of music and arts or sports.
The other groups of people have confidence in the learning. For them, any talent can be acquired be it a music or sports and any person can achieve anything through hard work and determination. They believe that the man is an architect of his own fate.
In my opinion, I support the second statement, though no one can rule out the role of natural talents. A person can be born with good voice tone and quality but he cannot achieve harmony, scale and rhythm without learning. And beyond one’s primitive ability, every innate talent is basic in nature and for its development, it requires encouragement and teaching. The consistency and hard work can then make you perfect. The poets and writers, though born with the talent, do not let out their work before making it perfect through several alterations. For example, William Wordsworth, the famous poet, revised and amended his poem daffodils. As it is said, “draft while drunk, but revise when sober. ”
On the whole, innate abilities do provide an aptitude for art and sports but success and perfection require trial and error method.
The statement states the
old
discussion of the role of nature and nurture. The
first
group believes that the innate capacities, inherited genes, or born
talent
play a key role in the professions like sports and performing arts such as music. It’s true that there are
people
who born with certain
talents
can perform
exceptionally
well in their fields. It’s
also
a general belief that musicians and artists
are born
with the ability of music and arts or sports.
The other groups of
people
have confidence in the learning. For them, any
talent
can
be acquired
be it a music or sports and any person can achieve anything through
hard
work and determination. They believe that the
man
is an architect of his
own
fate.
In my opinion, I support the second statement, though no one can
rule
out the role of natural
talents
. A person can
be born
with
good
voice tone and quality
but
he cannot achieve harmony, scale and rhythm without learning. And beyond one’s primitive ability, every innate
talent
is basic in nature and for its development, it requires encouragement and teaching. The consistency and
hard
work can then
make
you perfect. The poets and writers, though born with the
talent
, do not
let
out their work
before
making it perfect through several alterations.
For example
, William Wordsworth, the
famous
poet, revised and amended his poem daffodils. As it
is said
, “draft while drunk,
but
revise when sober. ”
On the whole
, innate abilities do provide an aptitude for art and sports
but
success and perfection require trial and error method.