In today’s world, we are still facing with a wide range of problems. Among these, childhood obesity is one of the most crucial issues and needs to be tackled. Therefore, schools suggested banning any adverts for junk food and other sweet snacks. However, my view is that this is not the best way as children can decide on their own and need a balanced nutrition.
Admittedly, on the one hand, if schools show advertisings which attract a lot of young people to buy sugary food, it could lead to problems as they keep consuming it. This reflects badly to their body, ending up being overweight. In this case, the only way to prevent obesity is probably to shut down all adverts displaying unhealthy food and only provide healthy food. As a result, children have no other choice than buying snacks with a huge amount of vitamins and proteins.
On the other hand, schools and colleges with flyers presenting unhealthy food does not mean it will eventually increase obesity. Even if some might get attracted by those, young people are allowed to decide what kind of food they want to eat as this is an individual decision. Moreover, consuming some sugary food is a necessary nutrition for each person as each body needs a balanced eating habit. For example, if someone consumed too many unhealthy burgers, they still can do some workouts in order not to get a disease such as obesity.
To conclude, although changing posters to healthy food might eliminate some attractions to junk food, I still believe that schools should allow showing them as it is an individual choice and will not lead to obesity for each child.
In
today
’s world, we are
still
facing with a wide range of problems. Among these, childhood obesity is one of the most crucial issues and needs to
be tackled
.
Therefore
,
schools
suggested banning any adverts for junk
food
and other sweet snacks.
However
, my view is that this is not the best way as children can decide on their
own
and need a balanced nutrition.
Admittedly
, on the one hand, if
schools
show
advertisings
which attract
a lot of
young
people
to
buy
sugary
food
, it could lead to problems as they
keep
consuming it. This reflects
badly
to their body, ending up being overweight.
In this case
, the
only
way to
prevent
obesity is
probably
to shut down all adverts displaying unhealthy
food
and
only
provide healthy
food
.
As a result
, children have no other choice than buying snacks with a huge amount of vitamins and proteins.
On the other hand
,
schools
and colleges with flyers presenting unhealthy
food
does not mean it will
eventually
increase obesity. Even if
some
might
get
attracted by those, young
people
are
allowed
to decide what kind of
food
they want to eat as this is an individual decision.
Moreover
, consuming
some
sugary
food
is a necessary nutrition for each person as each body needs a balanced eating habit.
For example
, if someone consumed too
many
unhealthy burgers, they
still
can do
some
workouts in order not to
get
a disease such as obesity.
To conclude
, although changing posters to healthy
food
might eliminate
some
attractions to junk
food
, I
still
believe that
schools
should
allow
showing them as it is an individual choice and will not lead to obesity for each child.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes