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It is often stated that newspapers have a great influence in our opinions and ideas. Does this influence have more positive or negative outcome? v.2

It is often stated that newspapers have a great influence in our opinions and ideas. Does this influence have more positive or negative outcome? v. 2
In today's world, the newspaper has become an important source of information. We are capable of knowing the activities around the world simply by reading a newspaper. As we can rely on it for all the information, it has have impacted our thoughts to some extent. The influence of newspaper on our lives has both negative and positive aspects. The most important advantage that we get from the newspaper is information from around the world. For instance, the information related to any scientific discovery, medical research, etc. Knowing all about such things will keep us updated and also help to develop our mind. Also, nowadays, newspapers contain a separate section for discussion or articles of different writers on different topics which could be related to sports, politics, health, etc. We can also find articles related to improving our health, maintaining a healthy relationship with people, interior designing and so on. Articles like those are essential in our daily life. We can not only entertain ourselves by reading them but can also use the tips to improve our own lifestyle. Not all of us have the idea of maintaining good health and decorating houses. Thus, reading those articles guides them towards better health and a beautiful home. Furthermore, there are articles related to children as well poems, stories, etc. Reading those articles will develop a reading habit in children and it will also help in their brain development. As every coin has two sides, the newspaper also has some negative impact on people' mind. Some newspapers tend to broadcast false news just for fame and money which brings unnecessary chaos in the country. Some newspapers even have abusive content or pornographic posts. This seriously brings negative impact on children and sometimes even on adults. It has been seen that people get ideas on committing crimes by reading about the crime posts or murder cases on newspaper. To conclude, the newspaper has both the negative and the positive influence on people. So, necessary actions should be taken by the respective authority before printing anything on newspaper. This way, we can control the negative impact of newspaper on people.
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today
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newspaper
has become an
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important
source of
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information
. We are capable of knowing the activities around the world
simply
by
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reading
a
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newspaper
. As we can rely on it for all the
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information
, it has have impacted our thoughts to
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some
extent. The influence of
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newspaper
on our
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lives
has both
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negative
and
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positive
aspects.

The most
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important
advantage that we
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get
from the
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newspaper
is
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information
from around the world.
For instance
, the
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information
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related
to any scientific discovery, medical research, etc. Knowing all about such things will
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keep
us updated and
also
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help
to develop our mind.
Also
, nowadays,
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newspapers
contain a separate section for discussion or
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articles
of
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different
writers on
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different
topics which could be
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related
to sports, politics,
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health
, etc. We can
also
find
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articles
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related
to improving our
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health
, maintaining a healthy relationship with
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people
, interior designing and
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so
on.
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Articles
like those are essential in our daily life. We can not
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only
entertain ourselves by
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reading
them
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but
can
also
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use
the tips to
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improve
our
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own
lifestyle. Not all of us have the
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idea
of maintaining
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good
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health
and decorating
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houses
.
Thus
,
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reading
those
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articles
guides them towards better
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health
and a
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beautiful
home.
Furthermore
, there are
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articles
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related
to children
as well
poems, stories, etc.
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Reading
those
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articles
will develop a
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reading
habit in children and it will
also
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help
in their brain development.

As every coin has two sides, the
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newspaper
also
has
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some
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negative
impact on
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people
' mind.
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Some
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newspapers
tend to broadcast false news
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just
for fame and money which brings unnecessary chaos in the country.
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Some
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newspapers
even have abusive content or pornographic posts. This
seriously
brings
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negative
impact on children and
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sometimes
even on adults. It has been
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seen
that
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people
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get
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ideas
on committing crimes by
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reading
about the crime posts or murder cases on newspaper.

To conclude
, the
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newspaper
has both the
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negative
and the
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positive
influence on
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people
.
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So
, necessary actions should
be taken
by the respective authority
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before
printing anything on
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newspaper
. This way, we can control the
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negative
impact of
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newspaper
on
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people
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
44Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
Change your language and you change your thoughts.
Karl Albrecht

IELTS essay It is often stated that newspapers have a great influence in our opinions and ideas. Does this influence have more positive or negative outcome? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
356 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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