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It is often stated that newspapers have a great influence in our opinions and ideas. Does this influence have more positive or negative outcome? v.1

It is often stated that newspapers have a great influence in our opinions and ideas. Does this influence have more positive or negative outcome? v. 1
The newspaper is one of the cheapest forms of the communication system which connects a large number of people. Newspaper plays and important role in the lives of the people, newspapers bring out the news and the happenings which are unknown to a large section of masses. The reason for the influence are as under newspaper affects the minds of the voter and influences them in a large scale, the voter has an independent decisive mind which nurtures by reading and knowing of all news prevailing around him. People are even influenced by their selective opinions; many are influenced by the advertisements popping out in the newspapers. They even impact the lives and thinking abilities of the students, they have an opportunity to undergo and acclaim large volume of academic knowledge which is published in the newspapers. Newspapers even influence the unemployed by connecting them with the employers not only in their area but also abroad. Newspapers play a significant role in the lives of the people. They do have options to opt the best with the glimpse of the same in the newspapers. Newspapers inculcate creative ideas to its readers by way of their lifestyle editions. They get to know the lifestyles of different people in different areas. Apart from the above, readers can know a wide variety of incidents happening around the world which often nurture their thinking and lifestyles. The main impact of newspapers is that people have the choice to get themselves updated with the latest around them and they can generate some sort of defensive methodology in the case of need when under influenced by serious incidents like robbery, theft etc. Newspapers in the recent past have definitely impacted the generation, not all are of positive in nature but there are situations where a riot atmosphere developed due to the prevailing news in the papers. Definitely, there are positive and negative aspects of the newspapers but the impact on people can be controlled by reserving the right on the printed matter. An independent authority can be bestowed the responsibility of justifying the impact of the news and decide its influence before publishing.
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,
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newspapers
bring out the
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news
and the happenings which are unknown to a
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large
section of masses. The reason for the
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influence
are as under
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newspaper
affects the minds of the voter and
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influences
them in a
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large
scale, the voter has an independent decisive mind which nurtures by reading and knowing of all
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news
prevailing around him.

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People
are even influenced by their selective opinions;
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are influenced
by the advertisements popping out in the
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newspapers
. They even
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impact
the
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lives
and thinking abilities of the students, they have an opportunity to undergo and acclaim
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large
volume of academic knowledge which
is published
in the newspapers.

Newspapers even
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influence
the unemployed by connecting them with the employers not
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in their area
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also
abroad.
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lives
of the
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people
. They do have options to opt the best with the glimpse of the same in the
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newspapers
.
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inculcate creative
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ideas
to its readers by way of their lifestyle editions. They
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to know the lifestyles of
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different
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people
in
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areas.

Apart from the above, readers can know a wide variety of incidents happening around the world which
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often
nurture their thinking and lifestyles. The main
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impact
of
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newspapers
is that
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people
have the choice to
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get
themselves updated with the latest around
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them and
they can generate
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some
sort of defensive methodology in the case of need when under influenced by serious incidents like robbery, theft etc.

Newspapers in the recent past have definitely impacted the generation, not all are of
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positive
in nature
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but
there are situations where a riot atmosphere developed due to the prevailing
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news
in the papers. Definitely, there are
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positive
and
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negative
aspects of the
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newspapers
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but
the
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impact
on
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people
can
be controlled
by reserving the right on the printed matter.

An independent authority can
be bestowed
the responsibility of justifying the
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impact
of the
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news
and decide its
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influence
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before
publishing.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay It is often stated that newspapers have a great influence in our opinions and ideas. Does this influence have more positive or negative outcome? v. 1

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
357 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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