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It is necessary to teach children skills of handwriting. v.1

It is necessary to teach children skills of handwriting. v. 1
Handwriting is an essential part to obtain an education. Some people think that children should not be taught the skills of calligraphy during the study period. Other people think that handwriting also being a part of education as it is necessary. I strongly agree with the second point of view. To begin with, good handwriting is very important because children learn to write clearly and become able to express their thoughts as well as ideas properly. As a consequence, this also leads to the performance of academic and professional as well. Furthermore, handwriting adds memory as any student prepares a list or some notes suddenly those papers lost due to any reason, it would be helpful to memorise ahead. Another instance, there are a number of formulas written by the teacher on the notebook that can be grasped and memorised for a lifetime. As well, good manuscript competitions are held schools to come forward those students who have ability to complete this challenge. As a result, these also build up confidence among the competitors. Beside this, good handwriting leads to better school performance and puts good impression on the reader or examiner in the most of the cases. Like, more than 70 percent of students who have nice and neat handwriting. Hence, it leads to good impression on the schoolmates and teachers as well. To sum up, it can be said that handwriting must be taught to pupils in school or universities like as technical equipments. Expresses views strongly, memorise things for a lifetime, boosts self-confidence during competitions are only learnt by good handwriting so that it should not be ignored in this digital world.
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Handwriting
is an essential part to obtain an education.
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people
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that children should not
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skills
of calligraphy during the study period. Other
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people
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think
that
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handwriting
also
being a part of education as it is necessary. I
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agree
with the second point of view.

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begin
with,
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good
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handwriting
is
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very
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important
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because
children learn to write
clearly
and become able to express their thoughts
as well
as
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ideas
properly
. As a consequence, this
also
leads to the performance of academic and professional
as well
.
Furthermore
,
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handwriting
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adds
memory as any student prepares a list or
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some
notes
suddenly
those papers lost due to any reason, it would be helpful to
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memorise
ahead. Another instance, there are a number of formulas written by the teacher on the notebook that can
be grasped
and
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memorised
for a lifetime.

As well
,
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good
manuscript competitions
are held
schools to
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come
forward those students who have ability to complete this challenge.
As a result
, these
also
build up confidence among the competitors. Beside this,
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good
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handwriting
leads to better school performance and puts
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good
impression on the reader or examiner in the most of the cases. Like, more than 70 percent of students who have nice and neat
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handwriting
.
Hence
, it leads to
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good
impression on the schoolmates and teachers
as well
.

To sum up, it can
be said
that
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handwriting
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must
be taught
to pupils in school or universities like as technical equipments.
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Expresses views
strongly
,
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memorise
things for a lifetime, boosts self-confidence during competitions are
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only
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learnt
by
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good
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handwriting
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so
that it should not be
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ignored
in this digital world.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay It is necessary to teach children skills of handwriting. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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