It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishmet is necessary to help the learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.2
It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishmet is necessary to help the learn this distinction. with this opinion? v. 2
The vitality of justifying the differences between right or wrong at very young ages is not neglectible for any individual. It has been well-said that punishment plays an important role in this situation. Actually to me punishment alone, does not make sense. But if it could be merged with applausing, it might have a better consequence. So it really depends on the situation and I personally think punishment itself, does not have a good outcome always.
Although, initially, it may seem simple, writing about this complex and controversial topic is not very convenient. One of the aspects that is worth to be pointed out in this essay, is that punishment, even mentally or physically, always brings a large amount of regret with itself. So if this attitude continues, it can lead to somehow depression in children and this, has a very bad impact on their personality. Because there is always a hidden thought inside them that vindicates the disability of doing anything right. But by applausing them with just good affairs, their self confidence starts to bloom. On the behalf of punishment, it can be exemplify that some sort of being out of the game ground really do have a good finish. For example, being in the corridor alone, or prohibitent of watching the best child show just for a few minutes.
In other hand if the child have not been punished for his or her wrong way of doing anything, an spirit of rebelience could grows inside them and this results a disobedient human being after.
I strongly believe appreciating has more affect than punishment. But looking through it objectively, somewhat punishment, of course just mental one, could be an effective idea for parents and teachers to demonstrate the differences between right and wrong.
To sum up, it can be reiterated that, punishment solely, not only isn’t valuable but also it can be harmful. The best method can be offered here, is the usage of punishment in very light way, and in addition, the rewarding for good behaviours.
The vitality of justifying the differences between right or
wrong
at
very
young ages is not
neglectible
for any individual. It has been well-said that
punishment
plays an
important
role in this situation. Actually to me
punishment
alone, does not
make
sense.
But
if it could
be merged
with
applausing
, it might have a better consequence.
So
it
really
depends on the situation and I
personally
think
punishment
itself, does not have a
good
outcome
always
.
Although,
initially
, it may seem simple, writing about this complex and controversial topic is not
very
convenient. One of the aspects
that is
worth to
be pointed
out in this essay, is that
punishment
, even mentally or
physically
, always brings a large amount of regret with itself.
So
if this attitude continues, it can lead to somehow depression in children and this, has a
very
bad
impact on their personality.
Because
there is always a hidden
thought
inside them that vindicates the disability of doing anything right.
But
by
applausing
them with
just
good
affairs, their
self confidence
starts
to bloom. On the behalf of
punishment
, it can be
exemplify
that
some
sort of being out of the game ground
really
do have a
good
finish.
For example
, being in the corridor alone, or
prohibitent
of watching the best child
show
just
for a few minutes.
In other hand if the child have not
been punished
for
his or her
wrong
way of doing anything,
an
spirit of
rebelience
could
grows
inside them and this results a disobedient human being after.
I
strongly
believe appreciating has more affect than
punishment
.
But
looking through it
objectively
, somewhat
punishment
,
of course
just
mental one, could be an effective
idea
for parents and teachers to demonstrate the differences between right and
wrong
.
To sum up, it can
be reiterated
that,
punishment
solely
, not
only
isn’t valuable
but
also
it can be harmful. The best method can
be offered
here, is the usage of
punishment
in
very
light way, and
in addition
, the rewarding for
good
behaviours
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes