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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t v.2

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t v. 2
Air and water quality is decreasing because of both industry and construction in several developing countries, around the globe. Thus, the need of the hour is to combat this problem. Better government policies and judicious usage of recycling methods can help prevent this. Strict government policies to limit the production and disposal of wastes will be beneficial in protecting the eco-system. Firstly, there is an excess amount of scrap produced by large firms. Secondly, it has been proved that industrial wastes from the developed world are also dumped in the less privileged countries. In order to effectively deal with this issue, government involvement is integral. For instance, according to a recent study by epidemiologists in All India Medical Institute, Delhi, the government policy to limit the waste disposal reduced the pollution indices by one-fifth. One other measure to effectively deal with this issue is by introducing better recycling procedures, in industries and construction sites. In other words, proper recycling protocols will reduce the amount of waste generated, thereby, limiting the injudicious disposal of trash. For example, a report in the US Business Weekly claimed that companies that invested in complex recycle plants produced only half the amount of trash generated by their counterparts, who lacked a proper recycle plant. Besides, effective recycling strategies can also help with the overlays. In conclusion, the reducing quality of air and water, in the developing nations because of both industries and constructions can be limited by several measures like, strict government legislations and proper recycling procedures.
Air and water quality is decreasing
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because
of both industry and construction in several
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developing countries
, around the globe.
Thus
, the need of the hour is to combat this problem. Better
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government
policies and judicious usage of
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recycling
methods can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
this.

Strict
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government
policies to limit the production and disposal of
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wastes
will be beneficial in protecting the
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eco-system
.
Firstly
, there is an excess amount of scrap produced by large firms.
Secondly
, it has
been proved
that industrial
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wastes
from the developed world are
also
dumped in the less privileged countries. In order to
effectively
deal with this issue,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
involvement is integral.
For instance
, according to a recent study by epidemiologists in All India Medical Institute, Delhi, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
policy to limit the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
disposal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
the pollution indices by one-fifth.

One other measure to
effectively
deal with this issue is by introducing better
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
procedures, in industries and construction sites.
In other words
, proper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
protocols will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
generated, thereby, limiting the injudicious disposal of trash.
For example
, a report in the US Business Weekly claimed that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
that invested in complex recycle plants produced
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
half the amount of trash generated by their counterparts, who lacked a proper recycle plant.
Besides
, effective
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recycling
strategies can
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
with the overlays.

In conclusion
, the reducing quality of air and water, in the developing nations
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of both industries and constructions can
be limited
by several measures like, strict
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
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legislations
and proper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
procedures.
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IELTS essay It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t v. 2

Essay
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4 paragraphs
252 words
7
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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