It is generally accepted nowadays that it is difficult to bring up a kid since there are lots of factors affecting their behaviour. At their early childhood they should know the good and bad. However, a punishment must be implemented whenever they are doing bad for them to learn from their mistakes. And it is the role of parents and teachers to guide them in the right path. I strongly agree with this agreement.
Firstly, it is essential to use punishment as a method of correcting the mistakes of children. As the world is becoming modern, it is the time that guiding a child is becoming difficult compared in 19th century times. Children today are curious and spoiled, they have to insist whatever they want even it has harmful effects to them. It seems that teaching good behaviour and virtues will be easier by both parents and teachers when children are still in young ages. If the kids know that they will be punished upon doing bad actions, they will usually stay away from committing these acts.
Secondly, punishment should always bet to teach a lesson and not to hurt them physically but also psychologically so everyone should be aware about the level of punishment that they are about to give. However, if there is a punishment, a reward system should also be there if the child has done something good for them to be more motivated in doing great things that we can be proud of.
To conclude, punishments are important to teach our children and not to encourage them to repeat the bad act. Moreover, these sort of punishments must be chosen very carefully so that our children could learn from them and do not become more violent due to punishments
It is
generally
accepted
nowadays that it is difficult to bring up a kid since there are lots of factors affecting their
behaviour
. At their early childhood they should know the
good
and
bad
.
However
, a
punishment
must
be implemented
whenever they are doing
bad
for them to learn from their mistakes. And it is the role of parents and teachers to guide them in the right path. I
strongly
agree
with this agreement.
Firstly
, it is essential to
use
punishment
as a method of correcting the mistakes of
children
. As the world is becoming modern, it is the time that guiding a child is becoming difficult compared in 19th century times.
Children
today
are curious and spoiled, they
have to
insist whatever they want even it has harmful effects to them. It seems that teaching
good
behaviour
and virtues will be easier by both parents and teachers when
children
are
still
in young ages. If the kids know that they will
be punished
upon doing
bad
actions, they will
usually
stay away from committing these acts.
Secondly
,
punishment
should always bet to teach a lesson and not to hurt them
physically
but
also
psychologically
so
everyone should be aware about the level of
punishment
that they are about to give.
However
, if there is a
punishment
, a reward system should
also
be there if the child has done something
good
for them to be more motivated in doing great things that we can be proud of.
To conclude
,
punishments
are
important
to teach our
children
and not to encourage them to repeat the
bad
act.
Moreover
,
these sort
of
punishments
must
be chosen
very
carefully
so
that our
children
could learn from them and do not become more violent due to
punishments
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes