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It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these and give your own opinion. v.3

It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. v. 3
In recent years, the intergration of technology and society has brought the increased use of the internet. Many people believe that it is a useful way of remaining in contact with others, however, some believe that it is a way of spreading false information. Both views will be discussed before an opinion is reached. Through the spread of the internet across the globe, many see this as a way to bring the community closer. In the past, the cost of phone calls and time taken to send letters, meant that it was harder to stay in contact. However, with the internet, social networks such as Facebook and Whatsapp have provided the means to stay connected for a less price. To illustrate, people in India are able to call and send messages to those halfway across the globe in an instant. On the other hand, as the popularity of social networks start to grow, one of the main problems which arise is the spread of fake news. As the internet has no censorship in most places, no one is there to monitor what is being spread. For example, in India, fake news has been prevalent due to the increased use of Whatsapp. As a result, innocent people have been killed due to false claims agains them, which had spread through social media. Hence, proving the dangers the internet has brought about. In conclusion, although the internet has brough society closer and connected with each other, the spread of fake information has can lead to far more dangers which can be detrimental to humans. Therefore, I believe that the internet helps with the spread of inaccurate news.
In recent years, the
intergration
of technology and society has brought the increased
use
of the internet.
Many
people
believe that it is a useful way of remaining in contact with others,
however
,
some
believe that it is a way of spreading false information. Both views will
be discussed
before
an opinion
is reached
.

Through the
spread
of the internet across the globe,
many
see
this as a way to bring the community closer. In the past, the cost of phone calls and time taken to
send
letters, meant that it was harder to stay in contact.
However
, with the internet, social networks such as Facebook and
Whatsapp
have provided the means to stay connected for a less price. To illustrate,
people
in India are able to call and
send
messages to those halfway across the globe in an instant.

On the other hand
, as the popularity of social networks
start
to grow, one of the main problems which arise is the
spread
of fake news. As the internet has no censorship in most places, no one is there to monitor what is being
spread
.
For example
, in India, fake news has been prevalent due to the increased
use
of
Whatsapp
.
As a result
, innocent
people
have
been killed
due to false claims
agains them
, which had
spread
through social media.
Hence
, proving the
dangers
the internet has brought about.

In conclusion
, although the internet has
brough
society closer and connected with each other, the
spread
of fake information has can lead to far more
dangers
which can be detrimental to humans.
Therefore
, I believe that the internet
helps
with the
spread
of inaccurate news.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.5
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