Certain people believe that we have nothing to gain from the life of earlier generations because we are scientifically more advanced than them. In contrast, others think there are lots of morals to learn from stories of the past and I agree with them.
Our recent better understanding of the universe has made some persons to disregard history. They believe that since we have been able to disprove many olden beliefs, the past is not worth learning from. For instance, it is now known that it is mosquito bite that causes malaria and not bad air as was previously accepted. Thus, for them, our scientific breakthroughs are evidences that we are more sound and rational than older generations. They claim it will be a waste of time to refer back to history and that it will even cause intellectual setback to our advancing society.
However, another set of individuals think that there is more to life than science. I agree with them. Their opinion is that good conduct is the backbone of every community and therefore should be given preference. Thus, they use life stories of their forefathers to instill discipline in their members. For example, in most villages, children are gathered at night and told stories of their ancestors depicting the reward of hardwork. The aim is to urge these kids to work hard. A study, conducted by Ondo state university final year psychology students in 2013 revealed that these children had more social acceptable character than their counterparts.
In conclusion, though we are scientifically better than our fathers, I still support the idea that we hat lots of good life values to learn from their life experiences. 
Certain  
people
 believe that we have nothing to gain from the  
life
 of earlier generations  
because
 we are  
scientifically
 more advanced than them.  
In contrast
, others  
think
 there are lots of morals to learn from stories of the past and I  
agree
 with them.
Our recent better understanding of the universe has made  
some
 persons to disregard history. They believe that since we have been able to disprove  
many
 olden beliefs, the past is not worth learning from.  
For instance
, it is  
now
 known that it is mosquito bite that causes malaria and not  
bad
 air as was previously  
accepted
.  
Thus
, for them, our scientific breakthroughs are evidences that we are more sound and rational than older generations. They claim it will be a waste of time to refer back to history and that it will even cause intellectual setback to our advancing society. 
However
, another set of individuals  
think
 that there is more to  
life
 than science. I  
agree
 with them. Their opinion is that  
good
 conduct is the backbone of every community and  
therefore
 should be  
given
 preference.  
Thus
, they  
use
  life
 stories of their forefathers to instill discipline in their members.  
For example
, in most villages, children  
are gathered
 at night and  
told
 stories of their ancestors depicting the reward of  
hardwork
. The aim is to urge these kids to work  
hard
. A study, conducted by  
Ondo
 state university final year psychology students in 2013 revealed that these children had more social acceptable character than their counterparts. 
In conclusion
, though we are  
scientifically
 better than our fathers, I  
still
 support the  
idea
 that we hat lots of  
good
  life
 values to learn from their  
life
 experiences. 
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes