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It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication, but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. v.2

It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication, but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. v. 2
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. The Internet is claimed to be an efficient way of communicating but is it though by some there are better solutions to look for the information needed. On the one hand it cannot be denied the internet represent nowadays a fundamental and widely used tool to quickly find argumentations about a huge range of topics. It contains many websites and resources such as Wikipedia, blogs, research platform, forum and so on. Moreover, there are plenty of social platforms, for instance Facebook, Twitter, Instagram which contribute to spread information. Moreover, nowadays almost all the newspapers are also online, which is a noticeably source of knowledge on daily issues. One the other hand the documentation which people can find on the internet it can be also controversial because of the lack of supervision and the possibility given to everyone to write. Finding information on the internet requires a long time reading all the information founded and selecting them. It is highly recommended to be taken from some official source to be sure they are attainable. By contrast there can be other places to find information, which are more selected and developed, such as books. Books, which has always been the main source of knowledge, today can be found in both digital and paper format. In conclusion, information researches can be done through the internet or the books, which represent in my opinion the most accreditable way of finding them. Internet is a great source for instant news and quick information, but to document myself deeply around a topic I would opt out for books.
Discuss both these views and give your
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own
opinion.

The Internet
is claimed
to be an efficient way of communicating
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but
is it
Did you mean "thought"?
though
by
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some
there are better solutions to look for the
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information
needed.

On the one hand it cannot
be denied
the internet represent nowadays a fundamental and
widely
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used
tool to
quickly
find
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argumentations
about a huge range of topics. It contains
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many
websites and resources such as Wikipedia, blogs, research platform, forum and
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so
on.
Moreover
, there are
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plenty
of social platforms,
for instance
Facebook, Twitter, Instagram which contribute to spread
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
.
Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Moreover
, nowadays almost all the newspapers are
also
online, which is a
noticeably
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source
of knowledge on daily issues.

Did you mean "on"?
One
the other hand the documentation which
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people
can find on the internet it can be
also
controversial
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because
of the lack of supervision and the possibility
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given
to everyone to write. Finding
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
on the internet requires a long time reading all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
founded and selecting them. It is
highly
recommended to
be taken
from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
official
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
source
to be sure they are attainable. By contrast there can be other places to find
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
, which are more selected and developed, such as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Books
, which has always been the main
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
source
of knowledge,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
can
be found
in both digital and paper format.

In conclusion
,
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information
researches can
be done
through the internet or the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, which represent in my opinion the most
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accreditable
way of finding them. Internet is a great
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
source
for instant news and quick
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
to document myself
deeply
around a topic I would opt out for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
Learning is a treasure that will follow its owner everywhere.
Chinese Proverb

IELTS essay It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication, but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
271 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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