Although it is argued by many that some people are bestowed with certain talents at birth, others claim that anyone can learn to become good at any game or music. In my opinion, I think that any child can acquire skills in sport and entertainment.
On the one hand, some people are of the opinion that children can learn to be perfect at singing for the simple reason that there are universal laws in life that can be learned and I agree. In other words, activities such as the playing of musical instruments have certain rules that must be obeyed before one can perfect such skills. This means that children can attain mastery of such skills if they can learn and apply those principles. In Baltimore College, for example, 50 out of 60 children who did not have prior knowledge of music were taught how to play the guitar successfully.
On the other hand, it is thought that some children are blessed with natural gifts due to the fact that they begin to show traces of great potentials in music and sports during childhood. That is to say that these children start to carry out some activities, even better than their mates in school at a young age. For instance, a test conducted by the University of America on 500 school children showed that 200 of them could actually play more than one musical instrument better than others.
In conclusion, while people may differ in their opinions, I think that young people can master any sport with great success. If children are shown the right processes, there will be an increase in children with skills in the world.
Although it
is argued
by
many
that
some
people
are bestowed
with certain talents at birth, others claim that anyone can learn to become
good
at any game or music. In my opinion, I
think
that any child can acquire
skills
in sport and entertainment.
On the one hand,
some
people
are of the opinion that
children
can learn to be perfect at singing for the simple reason that there are universal laws in life that can
be learned
and I
agree
.
In other words
, activities such as the playing of musical instruments have certain
rules
that
must
be obeyed
before
one can perfect such
skills
. This means that
children
can attain mastery of such
skills
if they can learn and apply those principles. In Baltimore College,
for example
, 50 out of 60
children
who did not have prior knowledge of music
were taught
how to play the guitar
successfully
.
On the other hand
, it is
thought
that
some
children
are blessed
with natural gifts due to the fact that they
begin
to
show
traces of great potentials in music and sports during childhood.
That is
to say that these
children
start
to carry out
some
activities, even better than their mates in school at a young age.
For instance
, a
test
conducted by the University of America on 500 school
children
showed
that 200 of them could actually play more than one musical instrument better than others.
In conclusion
, while
people
may differ in their opinions, I
think
that young
people
can master any sport with great success. If
children
are shown
the right processes, there will be an increase in
children
with
skills
in the world.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes