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It is difficult for teachers to be both popular (well-liked) and effective to help students learning. v.2

It is difficult for teachers to be both popular (well-liked) and effective to help students learning. v. 2
For teachers, the role they play should be more inclined to helping students in learning with efficiency. This is why we need teachers to guide us in academia in spite of the fact that they might not be liked by most of the students. Learning prevails over popularity at school for teachers. Thus, in my opinion, it is really arduous for teachers to make their students like them and meanwhile also be able to assist them in effective learning at school. To begin with, effective learning is always involved with the hard time. If a teacher helps his or her students to learn effectively, it means the aim of the teaching can be measured in a certain period of time. In other words, students need to be concentrated and serious, stopping making fun of each other like most young students do. This means teachers have an object to complete and usually within a set period of time during which students will be forced to learn and perceive the class material. Under such learning environment, it is not probable to make students like the teachers. Take math as an example. Most students dislike this subject; if teachers want all their students learn multiplication table effectively, they need to pressure students into paying attention to the class, admonishing them to learn it by heart in the class time. With stress, a majority of students will not agree much with what the teacher does in the class. Students will certainly grumble and dislike what the teachers do. Moreover, if they have hard time finishing this class task on time, they might be punished. The complaints they have can in turn go to the teachers in the end. Thus, it is not easy for a teacher to be able to effectively assist students and to be popular at the same time, of which the two behaviors are contradictory in many aspects. Secondly, students always like teachers who can make them feel at ease. It is almost impossible for teachers to help students effectively for their learning in a happy way. To be more concise, learning is not all fun and relaxing because we are absorbing new things, which might engage us in memorizing and in focusing. Take high school and elementary school students as examples. Most students go to school for fun, for meeting up their friends and for making friends they like. Of course, they also go to school for learning new things; however, if the teacher wants to effectively help the students learn new things in the class, the fun and relaxing time will be shrunk. For instance, in the mid-terms or finals, teachers are more serious and affirmative. Students do not like such learning environment as well as the teachers at that specific period of time. Therefore, how can a teacher be popular among students if he or she carries out the effective learning target in the class? The two elements are difficult to be achieved at the same time. Admittedly, some people may claim that it is not difficult for teachers to be liked by students and still be able to help them effectively in learning. A great teacher can also produce a way in which students can be helped effectively and the teacher can also be liked. It is the teaching approach the teacher adopts that affects the whole learning. Human beings have been made attempts to come up with a solution that they can, as the proverb puts it " Kill two birds with one stone. " A noble idea it is, the ambition of reaching a perfect outcome is the power of civic advancement for sure. However, it does not fit into the category of education. People need to make sacrifices in leaning. When the mission of such learning falls on teachers, they will of course try to make it easily absorbed to students. Yet when the latter mission cannot be reached, the teacher has to target on helping students learn effectively no matter students them or not. Thus, I agree with the prompt—It is difficult for teachers to be both popular and effective to help students in learning.
For
teachers
, the role they play should be more inclined to helping
students
in
learning
with efficiency. This is why we
need
teachers
to guide us in academia
in spite of
the fact that they might not
be liked
by most of the
students
.
Learning
prevails over popularity at
school
for
teachers
.
Thus
, in my opinion, it is
really
arduous for
teachers
to
make
their
students
like them and meanwhile
also
be able to assist them in
effective
learning
at school.

To
begin
with,
effective
learning
is always involved with the
hard
time
. If a
teacher
helps
his or her
students
to
learn
effectively
, it means the aim of the teaching can
be measured
in a certain period of
time
.
In other words
,
students
need
to
be concentrated
and serious, stopping making
fun
of each other like most young
students
do. This means
teachers
have an object to complete and
usually
within a set period of
time
during which
students
will
be forced
to
learn
and perceive the
class
material. Under such
learning
environment, it is not probable to
make
students
like the
teachers
. Take math as an example. Most
students
dislike this subject; if
teachers
want all their
students
learn
multiplication table
effectively
, they
need
to pressure
students
into paying attention to the
class
, admonishing them to
learn
it by heart in the
class
time
. With
stress
, a majority of
students
will not
agree
much with what the
teacher
does in the
class
.
Students
will
certainly
grumble and dislike what the
teachers
do.
Moreover
, if they have
hard
time
finishing this
class
task on
time
, they might
be punished
. The complaints they have can in turn go to the
teachers
in the
end
.
Thus
, it is not easy for a
teacher
to be able to
effectively
assist
students
and to be popular at the same
time
, of which the two behaviors are contradictory in
many
aspects.

Secondly
,
students
always like
teachers
who can
make
them feel at
ease
. It is almost impossible for
teachers
to
help
students
effectively
for their
learning
in a happy way
. To be more concise,
learning
is not all
fun
and relaxing
because
we are absorbing new things, which might engage us in memorizing and in focusing. Take high
school
and elementary
school
students
as examples. Most
students
go to
school
for
fun
, for meeting up their friends and for making friends they like.
Of course
, they
also
go to
school
for
learning
new things;
however
, if the
teacher
wants to
effectively
help
the
students
learn
new things in the
class
, the
fun
and relaxing
time
will
be shrunk
.
For instance
, in the mid-terms or finals,
teachers
are more serious and affirmative.
Students
do not like such
learning
environment
as well
as the
teachers
at that specific period of
time
.
Therefore
, how can a
teacher
be popular among
students
if he or she carries out the
effective
learning
target in the
class
? The two elements are difficult to
be achieved
at the same time.

Admittedly
,
some
people
may claim that it is not difficult for
teachers
to
be liked
by
students
and
still
be able to
help
them
effectively
in
learning
. A great
teacher
can
also
produce a way in which
students
can be
helped
effectively
and the
teacher
can
also
be liked
. It is the teaching approach the
teacher
adopts that affects the whole
learning
. Human beings have
been made
attempts to
come
up with a solution that they can, as the proverb puts it
&quot
; Kill two birds with one stone.
&quot
; A noble
idea
it is, the ambition of reaching a perfect outcome is the power of civic advancement for sure.
However
, it does not fit into the category of education.
People
need
to
make
sacrifices in leaning. When the mission of such
learning
falls on
teachers
, they will
of course
try to
make
it
easily
absorbed to
students
.
Yet
when the latter mission cannot
be reached
, the
teacher
has to
target on helping
students
learn
effectively
no matter
students
them or not.
Thus
, I
agree
with the prompt—It is difficult for
teachers
to be both popular and
effective
to
help
students
in
learning
.
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IELTS essay It is difficult for teachers to be both popular (well-liked) and effective to help students learning. v. 2

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