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It is better to ask your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice. v.2

It is better to ask your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice. v. 2
Knowledge and experience are the biggest weapons against problems and every now and then people seek for advice in complex matters. Other people who already have faced similar situations are sought after to provide their judgement of the situation. In my view it is better to ask your own knowledge and experience to approach problems than to ask other peoples. There are several reasons for this stance. Firstly, seeking for advice frequently may cloud one' s judgement. All us have met people who are always bewildered and do not know what they are supposed to do, and their confusion only increases as they approach more and more peoples for help. This happens because as they get more and more ideas from other people it becomes difficult for them to single out one solution. For instance, a friend of mine wanted to study abroad, but he was not sure about it as a result he started taking advice from all the friends consequently he ended up more confused than he had ever been. Secondly, seeking for an expert or mature insight debilitates one from taking an individual instance, be it a situation related to business, government, education or family. Looking up to others will take away the sense of individuality from one seeking the advice. For instance, a well known politician in India Mr. Rahul Gandhi is well know for consulting a lot with his mother before making any moves, as a result his image after being in politics for life time is that of an immature politician. In addition, some times people get persuaded by strong arguments as the people who give advice tend to defend their stand. This results in people ending up taking decision they are not happy about. For instance, in any public setting where people discuss about political issues, one can observe that when a contender presents strong arguments and facts other contenders yield to the point supported by the arguments. However, there are many benefits of taking advice from people who have experience in dealing with similar problems, that is why we see most of the high positions filled by people with white hairs. There are several situations when one is not capable of handling the situations as they are more complex in nature or might be a first timer for peoples, in such situations taking help from experts is the right thing to do. But otherwise one should look for weapons they have in their own inventory. In conclusion, for the reasons given above one should be meticulous about asking advice from others. It only helps when taken in right situation. Therefore, it can be said that one should look up to his own expertise to solve problems he faces.
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problems
and every
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now
and then
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people
seek for
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advice
in complex matters.
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Other
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people
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who
already have faced similar
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situations
are sought
after to provide their judgement of the
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situation
. In my view it is better to ask your
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own
knowledge and experience to approach
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problems
than to ask
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other
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peoples
. There are several reasons for this stance.

Firstly
, seeking for
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advice
frequently
may cloud
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people
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are always bewildered and do not know what they
are supposed
to do, and their confusion
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only
increases as they approach more and more
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peoples
for
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help
. This happens
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because
as they
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get
more and more
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ideas
from
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other
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people
it becomes difficult for them to single out one solution. For
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instance
, a friend of mine wanted to study abroad,
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but
he was not sure about it
as a result
he
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started
taking
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advice
from all the friends
consequently
he ended up more confused than he had ever been.

Secondly
, seeking for an expert or mature insight debilitates one from taking an individual
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instance
, be it a
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situation
related to business,
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government
, education or family. Looking up to others will take away the sense of individuality from one seeking the
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advice
. For
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instance
, a well known politician in India Mr. Rahul Gandhi is
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well know
for consulting a lot with his mother
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before
making any
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moves
,
as a result
his image after being in politics for
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life time
is that of an immature politician.

In addition
,
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some
times
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people
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get
persuaded by strong arguments as the
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people
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who
give
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advice
tend to defend their stand. This results in
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people
ending up taking decision they are not happy about. For
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instance
, in any public setting where
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people
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discuss about political
issues, one can observe that when a contender presents strong arguments and facts
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other
contenders yield to the point supported by the arguments.

However
, there are
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benefits of taking
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advice
from
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people
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who
have experience in dealing with similar
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problems
,
that is
why we
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see
most of the high positions filled by
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people
with white hairs. There are several
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situations
when one is not capable of handling the
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situations
as they are more complex in nature or might be a
first
timer for
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peoples
, in such
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situations
taking
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help
from experts is the right thing to do.
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But
otherwise
one should look for weapons they have in their
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own
inventory.

In conclusion
, for the reasons
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given
above one should be meticulous about asking
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advice
from others. It
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only
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helps
when taken in right
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situation
.
Therefore
, it can
be said
that one should look up to his
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own
expertise to solve
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problems
he faces.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
43Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay It is better to ask your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice. v. 2

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
456 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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