Many people hold the belief that being out of work is better than working without passion for the job. From my perspective, I completely agree with this viewpoint for several reasons.
The first argument given to support my opinion is that being jobless bring about plenty of time which could help one devote their time and effort to develop themselves personally and professionally. In this case, if employers can have more time to gain valuable experience and job-related skills, they will be more likely to have a better job prospect. In fact, many employers are often impressed by those with a big resume gap if these workers have good preparation as they think that those newly-hired candidates can become a major asset to the company.
Another rationale behind my belief is the fact that doing an unsatisfying job can have some inimical effects on an individual’s physical and mental health. Advocates of this view often argue that these jobs often go hand in hand with long working hours and accordingly, many workers often feel enervated after a long day at work followed by stress and pressure. By way of illustration, many Vietnamese students often choose medicine as a career without having any interest in this field because they think that this job is prestigious and well paid. When they become a doctor, they often suffer from burn out and being exhausted in their early career due to long hours of a working day.
In conclusion, I totally agree with this view that many employers should be out of a job rather than remain in the job that they do not like.
Many
people
hold the belief that being out of work is better than working without passion for the
job
. From my perspective, I completely
agree
with this viewpoint for several reasons.
The
first
argument
given
to support my opinion is that being jobless bring about
plenty
of time which could
help
one devote their time and effort to develop themselves
personally
and
professionally
.
In this case
, if employers can have more time to gain valuable experience and job-related
skills
, they will be more likely to have a better
job
prospect. In fact,
many
employers are
often
impressed by those with a
big
resume gap if these workers have
good
preparation as they
think
that those
newly
-hired candidates can become a major asset to the
company
.
Another rationale behind my belief is the fact that doing an unsatisfying
job
can have
some
inimical effects on an individual’s physical and mental health. Advocates of this view
often
argue that these
jobs
often
go hand in hand with long working hours and
accordingly
,
many
workers
often
feel enervated after a long day at work followed by
stress
and pressure. By way of illustration,
many
Vietnamese students
often
choose medicine as a career without having any interest in this field
because
they
think
that this
job
is prestigious and well paid. When they become a doctor, they
often
suffer from burn out and
being exhausted
in their early career due to long hours of a working day.
In conclusion
, I
totally
agree
with this view that
many
employers should be out of a
job
rather
than remain in the
job
that they do not like.
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