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It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems? v.4

It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems? v. 4
More and more of us go to tourist hot spots when there is a national holiday. This essay will suggest that the biggest problem this causes is litter and submit providing extra bins as the best solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion. The primary drawback of so many people visiting the same place at the same time is the dropping of packaging, plastic bags, bottles and even human waste in public areas. There are simply not enough places to dispose of rubbish properly and this often leads to people dumping it wherever they like. This results in public places becoming unsightly, unhygienic, and smelly and even results in the destruction of public property. For example, Thanh Nien News in Vietnam recently reported that during the week-long holiday in May 2015, the beach resort of Vung Tau was swamped with more tourists than it could cope with and this resulted in the parks and beaches quickly becoming covered in filth. A viable solution to this issue could be the use of more waste disposal facilities during peak periods. Extra places to dispose of waste could be deployed so that there are always options for people who need them and it could also be made clear where waste should be brought. For instance, at large events such as Glastonbury Festival in the UK, thousands of extra bins are installed in the adjacent town to cope with the extra refuse. To conclude, the major issue with too many holidaymakers is people leaving waste behind and a possible way to solve this is to deploy extra receptacles.
More and more of us go to tourist hot spots when there is a national holiday. This essay will suggest that the biggest problem this causes is litter and submit providing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
extra
bins as the best solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

The primary drawback of
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so
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many
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people
visiting the same
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place
at the same time is the dropping of packaging, plastic bags, bottles and even human
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waste
in public areas. There are
simply
not
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enough
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places
to dispose of rubbish
properly
and this
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often
leads to
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people
dumping it wherever they like. This results in public
You should probably use "place".
places
becoming
unsightly
, unhygienic, and smelly and even results in the destruction of public property.
For example
, Thanh
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Nien
News in Vietnam recently reported that during the week-long holiday in May 2015, the beach resort of
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Vung
Tau
was swamped
with more tourists than it could cope with and this resulted in the parks and beaches
quickly
becoming covered in filth.

A viable solution to this issue could be the
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use
of more
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waste
disposal facilities during peak periods.
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Extra
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places
to dispose of
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waste
could
be deployed
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so
that there are always options for
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people
who need them and it could
also
be made
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clear
where
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waste
should
be brought
.
For instance
, at large
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events
such as Glastonbury Festival in the UK, thousands of
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extra
bins
are installed
in the adjacent town to cope with the
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extra
refuse.

To conclude
, the major issue with too
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many
holidaymakers is
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people
leaving
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waste
behind and a possible way to solve this is to deploy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
extra
receptacles.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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