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t is becoming increasingly popular for people to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this causes? What solutions are these to this problems. v.1

t is becoming increasingly popular for people to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this causes? What solutions are these to this problems. v. 1
Tourist destinations are the best ways to spend time with families or friends. These are reached by people during public holidays and become popular with high scale. This essay will discuss that, filthy environment and damage to historical places are some problems caused by high level of tourists, while promoting cleanings and proper supervision for safety for historical things. As people are planning their holidays to visit various destinations across the country. This leads the problem of litter, and the spreading of garbage in these visitor places origin a filthy environment, which is unbearable sometimes because of bad smell emanating from garbage. As a result, it causes pollution in places. Moreover, it is witnessed that the historic buildings face a stage of vandalism in which most of these destinations. For example, a recent survey about the tourism that people cause major issues which were destroyed in the importance of visitor places by increasing litter and harm to these. Hence, it is important that we need to address these problems at the earliest. Despite all this, these are various methods to combat with tourist sites and strike a balance. These include promoting the necessity of clean and healthy environment. This is achieved by hosting various cleanings campaigns among the people and providing adequate dustbins at the sightseer places, which is also lead awareness through the public toward their importance. Similarly, proper supervision is to be required for preventing the destinations about tourism. In this way, the lustre of these can be saved for a long time. Therefore, we should keep in minds to overweight causes. In conclusion, many people have risen to the popularity of various places by reaching there in their holidays. This can cause problems like garbage and spoil image of these destinations. However, everyone needs awareness by following campaigns and placing dustbins over these sites, which help to reduce pollution. Last but not least, a proper supervision helps in saving the importance of these destinations for a long time.
Tourist
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destinations
are the best ways to spend time with families or friends. These
are reached
by
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people
during public holidays and become popular with high scale. This essay will discuss that, filthy environment and damage to historical
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places
are
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some
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problems
caused by high level of tourists, while promoting cleanings and proper supervision for safety for historical things.

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As
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people
are planning their holidays to visit
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various
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destinations
across the country. This leads the
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problem
of litter, and the spreading of garbage in
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these visitor
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places
origin a filthy environment, which is unbearable
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sometimes
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because
of
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bad
smell emanating from garbage.
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, it causes pollution in
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places
.
Moreover
, it
is witnessed
that the historic buildings face a stage of vandalism in which most of these
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destinations
.
For example
, a recent survey about the tourism that
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people
cause major issues which were
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destroyed
in the importance of visitor
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places
by increasing litter and harm to these.
Hence
, it is
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important
that we need to address these
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problems
at the earliest.

Despite all this, these are
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various
methods to combat with tourist sites and strike a balance. These include promoting the necessity of clean and healthy environment. This
is achieved
by hosting
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various
cleanings campaigns among the
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people
and providing adequate dustbins at the sightseer
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places
, which is
also
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lead
awareness through the public toward their importance.
Similarly
, proper supervision is to
be required
for preventing the
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destinations
about tourism. In this way, the
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lustre
of these can
be saved
for a long time.
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, we should
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keep
in
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minds to overweight
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In conclusion
,
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many
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people
have risen to the popularity of
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various
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places
by reaching there in their holidays. This can cause
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problems
like garbage and spoil image of these
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destinations
.
However
, everyone needs awareness by following campaigns and placing dustbins over these sites, which
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help
to
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reduce
pollution. Last
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but
not least, a proper supervision
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helps
in saving the importance of these
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destinations
for a long time.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay t is becoming increasingly popular for people to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this causes? What solutions are these to this problems. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
331 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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