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It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems? v.1

It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems? v. 1
In local holidays travelling to exotic destinations is gaining fame among tourists. This essay will suggest that the primary problem this cause is litter and that possible solution is to provide extra bins. The pressing problem of many people visiting the same places at any national holidays is throwing rubbish. People drop thrashes such as plastic bottles, and chocolate wraps in public areas because of the lack of proper disposable litter bins. This resulted in the waste being scattered into the atmosphere, causing hygienic issues and this even leads to serious damages to the public properties and that needs to employ labour force for proper removal of waste. For example, Phu Quoc island, known for white-sand beaches, reported in the local newspaper that it was severely littered its surroundings with rubbishes during the TET holidays in 2018. A possible solution to littering is by providing extra litter bins during the season times when more people visit to spend their holidays. These additional bins could be made available for visitors, namely where they sit to eat or they spend more time in any specific areas. Having placed litter cans at every few kilometers, it would be easily accessible to use the bins effectively. For instance, Sun World Lagoon in Malaysia, an attractive water theme park, is provided with nearly over 100 bins at various places to support their visitors to cope with extra refuse. In conclusion, installing extra litter bins to manage tourists littering the public areas during the peak periods is a viable option. It is recommended to the government that it provides additional cans throughout the year and follow an effective thrash disposal method to protect tourist destinations.
In local
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holidays
travelling to exotic destinations is gaining fame among tourists. This essay will suggest that the primary problem this cause is
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litter
and that possible solution is to provide
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extra
bins.

The pressing problem of
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many
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people
visiting the same places at any national
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holidays
is throwing rubbish.
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People
drop thrashes such as plastic bottles, and chocolate wraps in public areas
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because
of the lack of proper disposable
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litter
bins. This resulted in the waste
being scattered
into the atmosphere, causing hygienic issues and this even leads to serious damages to the public properties and that needs to employ
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labour
force for proper removal of waste.
For example
,
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Phu
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Quoc
island, known for white-sand beaches, reported in the local newspaper that it was
severely
littered its surroundings with rubbishes during the TET
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holidays
in 2018.

A possible solution to littering is by providing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
extra
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
litter
bins during the season times when more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
visit to spend their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
holidays
. These additional bins could
be made
available for visitors,
namely
where they sit to
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eat or
they spend more time in any specific areas. Having placed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
litter
cans at every few kilometers, it would be
easily
accessible to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the bins
effectively
.
For instance
, Sun World Lagoon in Malaysia, an attractive water theme park,
is provided
with
nearly
over 100 bins at various places to support their visitors to cope with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
extra
refuse.

In conclusion
, installing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
extra
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
litter
bins to manage tourists littering the public areas during the peak periods is a viable option. It
is recommended
to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
that it provides additional cans throughout the year and follow an effective thrash disposal method to protect tourist destinations.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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