Arts forms such as music, film and sculpture define heritage cultures. In this generation, more importance is being given to the improvement of public services and facilities by the government. People are aware of the government's priority, equal investment must be used for protecting the ancient arts and cultures. I personally think, both fields are significant for the nation's economic as the same as culture development.
To begin with, public services and facilities such as schools, hospitals and communities infrastructure are important for the better standards of living. However, in illiterate societies may increase of criminal activities and lack of awareness among the population. In particular, every child and adult needs education for a better future. Likewise, health also important that the government should be invested. Consequently, it results in healthy communities that can be contributed to a better performance. Therefore, the investment in public facilities are necessary to focus on.
Similarly, arts can not be neglected because it leads back to the ancient history and portraits cultural aspects in the modern world. It illustrates the story of its uniqueness and identity so that it should be distributed to different arts besides investment in public services. Hence, people like to enjoy the entertainment to relieve the strain in life. This is the reason that the government needs to be acknowledged, while preparing the budget.
In conclusion, arts investments are wasted because it indicates the fundamantals of ancient culture development and raise the standard of living. In the same way, it contributes to the nation's uniqueness. I think, the government must offer its financial assistance to both fields constantly.
Arts forms
such as music, film and sculpture define heritage
cultures
. In this generation, more importance is being
given
to the improvement of
public
services and facilities by the
government
.
People
are aware of the
government
's priority, equal
investment
must
be
used
for protecting the ancient
arts
and
cultures
. I
personally
think
, both fields are significant for the nation's economic as the same as
culture
development.
To
begin
with,
public
services and facilities such as schools, hospitals and communities infrastructure are
important
for the better standards of living.
However
, in illiterate societies may increase of criminal activities and lack of awareness among the population.
In particular
, every child and adult needs education for a better future.
Likewise
, health
also
important
that the
government
should
be invested
.
Consequently
, it results in healthy communities that can
be contributed
to a better performance.
Therefore
, the
investment
in
public
facilities are necessary to focus on.
Similarly
,
arts
can not
be neglected
because
it leads back to the ancient history and portraits cultural aspects in the modern world. It illustrates the story of its uniqueness and identity
so
that it should
be distributed
to
different
arts
besides
investment
in
public
services.
Hence
,
people
like to enjoy the entertainment to relieve the strain in life. This is the reason that the
government
needs to
be acknowledged
, while preparing the budget.
In conclusion
,
arts
investments
are wasted
because
it indicates the
fundamantals
of ancient
culture
development and raise the standard of living.
In the same way
, it contributes to the nation's uniqueness. I
think
, the
government
must
offer its financial assistance to both fields
constantly
.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes