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Is homework a good or bad thing? Is homework a good or bad thing? Is homework a good or bad thing? v.1

Is homework a good or bad thing? Is homework a good or bad thing? Is homework a good or bad thing? v. 1
Homework is an essential part of schooling. I believe this is a good thing to improve and boost one’s skills. I also believe that is a great background for each person who would like to succeed in the future. First of all, in my opinion, doing homework has a positive influence on a child’s responsibility. In other words, finding the solutions of the home assignment or some extra task should be in the self dependent way of schooling which will help to improve their skills and abilities. As a result, during homework a person will recall and brush up the information that they received in class, as well as look for new information to solve the task, which will eventually increase knowledge and deep understanding of the subject. A recent study, which has been conducted by Head Department of Education, found that 63% of students who spent at least two hours a day on doing their homework passed their exam with excellent marks/grades. Second of all, I also believe that doing homework will help children to prepare for future work environment. To put it simply, an individual who spends a couple hours every day on their self-education will develop qualities such as discipline and self-organization that will help to achieve success in future career. As a result, people who do their homework in the future become more independent and self-confident, which helps them to take on more challenging and responsible tasks that help them climb the career ladder faster. According to the Forbes magazine survey, almost 81% of respondents who became millionaires recognize that doing homework helped them to develop skills that led them to success. In conclusion, homework is a very important part of education. In my opinion, Home assignments are a good way to develop and push up one’s skills to the next level. Also, I think that Homework is an excellent opportunity for each person who would like to become successful in the future.
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Homework
is an essential part of schooling. I believe this is a
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good
thing to
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improve
and boost one’s
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skills
. I
also
believe
that is
a great background for each person
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who
would like to succeed in the future.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, in my opinion,
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doing
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homework
has a
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positive
influence on a child’s responsibility.
In other words
, finding the solutions of the home assignment or
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some
extra task should be in the self dependent way of schooling which will
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help
to
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improve
their
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skills
and abilities.
As a result
, during
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homework
a person will recall and brush up the information that they received in
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class
,
as well
as look for new information to solve the task, which will
eventually
increase knowledge and deep understanding of the subject. A recent study, which has
been conducted
by Head Department of Education, found that 63% of students
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who
spent at least two hours a day on
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doing
their
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homework
passed their exam with excellent marks/grades.

Second of all, I
also
believe that
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doing
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homework
will
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help
children to prepare for
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future
work environment. To put it
simply
, an individual
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who
spends a
Did you mean "couple of"? (In formal written English 'of' should follow 'couple'.)
couple
hours every day on their self-education will develop qualities such as discipline and self-organization that will
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help
to achieve success in
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future
career.
As a result
,
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people
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who
do their
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homework
in the
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future
become more independent and self-confident, which
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helps
them to take on more challenging and responsible tasks that
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help
them climb the career ladder faster. According to the Forbes magazine survey, almost 81% of respondents
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who
became millionaires recognize that
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doing
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homework
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
them to develop
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skills
that led them to success.

In conclusion
,
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homework
is a
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very
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important
part of education. In my opinion, Home assignments are a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
way to develop and push up one’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
to the
next
level.
Also
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Homework
is an excellent opportunity for each person
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
would like to become successful in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Is homework a good or bad thing? Is homework a good or bad thing? Is homework a good or bad thing? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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