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Why do you think teachers give homework to students? How important is it for students to have homework? Are there any other ways of revising school lessons? Perhaps homework should be abolished. Give your opinion about this. v.1

Why do you think teachers give homework to students? How important is it for students to have homework? Are there any other ways of revising school lessons? Perhaps homework should be abolished. Give your opinion about this. v. 1
In today's completive world, students are constantly under pressure to perform well in studies and homework has become a part of today's study culture. Teachers make students do homework in order to reduce their load in school and parents are supportive of this practice because it keeps their children busy leaving little time for anything other than studies. Doing homework is important to a certain extent as it lets the students be in touch with the syllabus even after school hours and makes it easier for them to grasp lessons better the next day at school. Another benefit is that the parents can keep themselves up-to-date with their child's progress in school. For them, the more time their child spends on studies the better. Everyone wants their children to excel in studies to be prepared for the cut-throat competition that is on offer. What adults do not realise is that playtime is as important to children as is study time. It is important for children's psychological wellbeing to have variation in activities as opposed to being in front of the books all the time. Schools can add a revision period at the end of school hours so that the pupils finish revising the day's lessons and go home without having to worry about homework. In some countries, students are never given homework and are not event required to carry books back and forth between home and school. In my opinion, homework should be abolished in our country thus reducing a burden on students. This will also put an end to the overloaded bags that our children have to carry which is posing a risk to their physical health. Students should be given enough time for extra-curricular activities also.
In
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today
's
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completive
world,
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students
are
constantly
under pressure to perform well in
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studies
and
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homework
has become a part of
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today
's
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study
culture. Teachers
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make
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students
do
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homework
in order to
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reduce
their load in
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school
and parents are supportive of this practice
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because
it
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keeps
their
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children
busy leaving
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little
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time
for anything other than studies.

Doing
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homework
is
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important
to a certain extent as it
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lets
the
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students
be in touch with the syllabus even after
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school
hours and
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makes
it easier for them to grasp lessons better the
next
day at
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school
. Another benefit is that the parents can
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keep
themselves up-to-date with their child's progress in
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school
. For them, the more
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time
their child spends on
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studies
the better. Everyone wants their
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children
to excel in
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studies
to
be prepared
for the
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cut
-throat competition
that is
on offer.

What adults do not
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realise
is that playtime is as
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important
to
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children
as is
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study
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time
. It is
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important
for children's psychological
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wellbeing
to have variation in activities as opposed to being in front of the books all the
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time
.
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Schools
can
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add
a revision period at the
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end
of
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school
hours
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so
that the pupils finish revising the day's lessons and go home without having to worry about
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homework
. In
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some
countries,
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students
are never
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given
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homework
and are not
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event
required to carry books back and forth between home and school.

In my opinion,
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homework
should
be abolished
in our country
thus
reducing a burden on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
. This will
also
put an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
to the overloaded bags that our
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children
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have to
carry which is posing a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
to their physical health.
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Students
should be
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given
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enough
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time
for extra-curricular activities
also
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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Flora Lewis

IELTS essay Why do you think teachers give homework to students? How important is it for students to have homework? Are there any other ways of revising school lessons? Perhaps homework should be abolished. Give your opinion about this. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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