Nowadays, tourism has strongly developed and become one of the main drives for the economies of many countries. In particular, international tourism has played an important role in culture exchanges between countries. However, there are concerns that the flows of foreign visitors bring more tension to the destination countries. In my opinion, I would rather disagree with it because of the following reasons.
First, by traveling abroad and visiting other countries and territories, people can experience and feel the real life and cultures of the places they visit. As a proverb says: ”seeing is believing”, the true scene will definitely has a long-lasting impact on a person. For instance, an American traveler may join a tour to visit a historic prison using during the Vietnam war, so he can have a clear image of how fierce and scary the war is. It would be more influential to him compared with the photos or books he has read about that war.
On the other hand, the governments usually organize the tourism promotion campaigns to attract and increase the number of the foreign visitors. Those activities will help to spread the image of people and culture of each country worldwide. By this way, everyone will have the opportunities to approach and get familiar with various cultures around the world.
Overall, I would say that I am convinced by the advantages of international tourism in term of encouraging the understanding between countries, even though there are still some people hold that it leads to a great deal of tension.
Nowadays,
tourism
has
strongly
developed and become one of the main drives for the economies of
many
countries
.
In particular
, international
tourism
has played an
important
role in
culture
exchanges between
countries
.
However
, there are concerns that the flows of foreign visitors bring more tension to the destination
countries
. In my opinion, I would
rather
disagree with it
because
of the following reasons.
First
, by traveling abroad and visiting other
countries
and territories,
people
can experience and feel the real life and
cultures
of the places they visit. As a proverb says:
”seeing
is believing”, the true scene will definitely
has
a long-lasting impact on a person.
For instance
, an American traveler may
join
a tour to visit a historic prison using during the
Vietnam war
,
so
he can have a
clear
image of how fierce and scary the war is. It would be more influential to him compared with the photos or books he has read about that war.
On the other hand
, the
governments
usually
organize the
tourism
promotion campaigns to attract and increase the number of the foreign visitors. Those activities will
help
to spread the image of
people
and
culture
of each
country
worldwide. By this way, everyone will have the opportunities to approach and
get
familiar with various
cultures
around the world.
Overall
, I would say that I
am convinced
by the advantages of international
tourism
in term of encouraging the understanding between
countries
,
even though
there are
still
some
people
hold that it leads to a great deal of tension.
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