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Integrated speaking (question 4)the article about the natural selection and the lecture give an example on earthworm to clarify the topic of the passage. v.1

Integrated speaking (question 4)the article about the natural selection and the lecture give an example on earthworm to clarify the topic of the passage. v. 1
Films are the latest form of art as they began to become popular in the 19th Century and they exhibit a tremendous development in the technology, yet there is a popular belief that they are less important than literature and painting which exist from the archaic era. From my perspective, films have the same artistic value as writings and drawings. Certainly literature, paintings & sculptures have a much longer history than movies. They are also deeply rooted in the culture and that makes them a priceless representation of various eras. For example, literature of each century gives us an accurate description of life in those times. Paintings and sculptures have the same value. Needless to say they are the gold mines of information for historians and anthropologists. However, it is wrong to measure the historic and aesthetic value of an art form by the number of years it has been in existence. It is true that films are the newest form of art and entertainment. However, as like paintings and literature they also reflect the era in which they are made. They also showcase the growth of technology. What’s more films are intrinsically linked to literature and there are many film adaptations of classic literature. Another advantage that films have over other art forms is that they enjoy mass appeal. Actually, films reach a greater audience than books or other art forms. This popularity makes them a valuable form of art and a good medium for conveying socio-cultural messages. Better still, unlike a novel or a drawing; a film is a labour of love of hundreds of artists and technicians and going to the cinema is rated as the highest form of entertainment today. To conclude, I believe that films have the same artistic value as painting and literature. One cannot gauge the value of art merely from the number of years of history, they have; nor can one consider them less valuable just because aesthetic preferences differ.
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yet
there is a popular belief that they are less
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important
than
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literature
and
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painting
which exist from the archaic era. From my perspective, films have the same artistic
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value
as writings and drawings.

Certainly
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literature
,
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paintings
& sculptures have a much longer history than movies. They are
also
deeply
rooted in the culture and that
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makes
them a priceless representation of various eras.
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literature
of each century gives us an accurate description of life in those times.
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Paintings
and sculptures have the same
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value
. Needless to say they are the gold mines of information for historians and anthropologists.

However
, it is
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wrong
to measure the historic and aesthetic
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value
of an
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art
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form
by the number of years it has been in existence. It is true that films are the newest
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form
of
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art
and entertainment.
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and
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they
also
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are made
. They
also
showcase the growth of technology. What’s more films are
intrinsically
linked to
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literature
and there are
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film adaptations of classic
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literature
. Another advantage that films have over other
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art
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forms
is that they enjoy mass appeal. Actually, films reach a greater audience than books or other
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art
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forms
. This popularity
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of
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art
and a
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good
medium for conveying
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socio-cultural
messages. Better
still
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of
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of hundreds of artists and technicians and going to the cinema
is rated
as the highest
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form
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today
.

To conclude
, I believe that films have the same artistic
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value
as
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painting
and
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literature
. One cannot gauge the
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IELTS essay Integrated speaking (question 4)the article about the natural selection and the lecture give an example on earthworm to clarify the topic of the passage. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
328 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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