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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words v.52

Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. v. 52
Technology is everywhere. For most of us it is affecting our daily routine and still developing. Technology can affect life both positively and negatively. This essay will discuss various benefits and drawbacks of information technology. To begin with, it is the usage of systems and networking. And also it has replaced the work of human in recent times. There are several types of information technology for example, Analytics, Content management, Project management and so on. Having said that, these are the most useful tools to make life easier. Updates in technologies are a new way of thinking or doing things differently. Moreover, it dominates by producing various technologies such as laptops, mobile phones in order to replace our leisure activities. Due to this, many people are facing major health issues. Above all, youngsters are getting addicted to it. As a result, it might spoil their studies. Besides, it also has various advantages of reducing our travelling time. For instance, there are options like online payments in case of any bills such as electricity bill, water bill, phone bill and so on. In most of the cases, people can achieve anything with the help of a laptop and a good internet connection. However, it is better and faster with less hassle and at a much affordable rate. With energy consumption increasing along with the world's population, electric cars, LEDs, smart grids are some areas where advances in sustainability are expected. Similarly, these ideas may dominate our work pace in the upcoming years. To conclude, the benefits of information technology outweigh the negatives to an extreme level. Therefore, it has a chance to dominate all our home activities in future period. It is also recommended that, we may practice to update ourselves.
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Technology
is everywhere. For most of us it is affecting our daily routine and
still
developing.
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Technology
can affect life both
positively
and
negatively
. This essay will discuss various benefits and drawbacks of information technology.

To
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begin
with, it is the usage of systems and networking. And
also
it has replaced the work of human in recent times. There are several types of information
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
for example
, Analytics, Content management, Project management and
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so
on. Having said that, these are the most useful tools to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
life easier. Updates in
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technologies
are a new way of thinking or doing things
differently
.
Moreover
, it dominates by producing various
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technologies
such as laptops, mobile phones in order to replace our leisure activities. Due to this,
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many
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people
are facing major health issues.
Above all
, youngsters are getting addicted to it.
As a result
, it might spoil their studies.

Besides
, it
also
has various advantages of reducing our travelling time.
For instance
, there are options like online payments in case of any
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bills
such as electricity
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bill
, water
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bill
, phone
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bill
and
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so
on. In most of the cases,
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people
can achieve anything with the
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help
of a laptop and a
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good
internet connection.
However
, it is better and faster with less hassle and at a much affordable rate. With energy consumption increasing along with the world's population, electric cars, LEDs, smart grids are
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some
areas where advances in sustainability are
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expected
.
Similarly
, these
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ideas
may dominate our work pace in the upcoming years.

To conclude
, the benefits of information
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technology
outweigh the negatives to an extreme level.
Therefore
, it has a chance to dominate all our home activities in future period. It is
also
recommended that, we may
The verb 'practice' is used with the gerund form: "practice updating".
practice to update
ourselves.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. v. 52

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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