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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.20

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. v. 20
Ordinary citizens have no competence to help the habitat, while government and large corporations can make changes. While it is true that government and business can cope with environmental improvements, I believe it is people who can and should contribute more. There are several reasons why I believe that people are the ones who contribute most to Mother Nature, after all, it is in her that we live and that we will live until our death. Every citizen can plant a tree and this will have a very good impact on the air of a city, for example. Everyone can learn to recycle garbage properly and this is another way to help our territory. Another excellent way to help our world is to spend less water, such as taking shorter baths and thus avoid wasting unnecessary water. Another great initiative that has become more popular among the people who are involved in a better world is to use environmentally friendly products. For example, I myself try to buy my makeup that certifies that they are free from cruelty to animals, that they use the most natural products possible, free from aggressive chemistry and so on. In conclusion, everyone can help the environment, everyone can do their part regardless of whether the government does or not. The important thing is to be engaged for a better and healthier world for all.
Ordinary citizens have no competence to
help
the habitat, while
government
and large corporations can
make
changes
. While it is true that
government
and business can cope with environmental improvements, I believe it is
people
who can and should contribute more.

There are several reasons why I believe that
people
are the ones who contribute most to Mother Nature,
after all
, it is in her that we
live
and that we will
live
until our death. Every citizen can plant a tree and this will have a
very
good
impact on the air of a city,
for example
. Everyone can learn to recycle garbage
properly
and this is another way to
help
our territory. Another excellent way to
help
our world is to spend less water, such as taking shorter baths and
thus
avoid wasting unnecessary water.

Another great initiative that has become more popular among the
people
who
are involved
in a better world is to
use
environmentally
friendly products.
For example
, I myself try to
buy
my makeup that certifies that they are free from cruelty to animals, that they
use
the most natural products possible, free from aggressive chemistry and
so
on.

In conclusion
, everyone can
help
the environment, everyone can do their part regardless of whether the
government
does or not. The
important
thing is to
be engaged
for a better and healthier world for all.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. v. 20

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
230 words
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