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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant v.37

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. 37
Nowadays, the vast majority of people are likely to think that study a foreign language as a mere reason to travel and work in other countries, while others believe that learning other languages could also be beneficial for many things. However, the essay will investigate these very topical debates before a rational conclusion. The proponents are seriously arguing that learning foreign languages are compulsory for the traveller and the worker abroad. First and foremost, language is a basic thing that has to be prepared for travelling abroad, without the language, it would refer to the difficulty in communicating with others. Going to London for visiting to certain fascinating places, for instance, it obviously needs English language to interact with others. Furthermore, working in a foreign country is also extremely requiring a native language of that area. As a result, the running of their job would be done smoothly and improve the ability to work abroad. Thus, learning a foreign language for them is a pivotal element to implement in their daily activities there. However, the opponents said it is not only on those matters, but it would also be beneficial for other things. Firstly, several objects of study are not available in one language, it could be provided in other languages. Due to the different scientist who came from another region, then, if an individual began to study a distinct language, it would enrich their knowledge with unlimited access. Moreover, the teenagers also need to learn foreign language for who decide to pursue their study abroad. To exemplify, some students have to master the English language to study in the United Kingdom, since, its instruction is using the country's language. By way of conclusion, the advocates of this topic assume that the main reason of learning other languages is only for the traveller and worker abroad, as for communicating in tour exploration and supporting the interaction in working. Otherwise, others argue to use foreign language for studying various knowledge from other language around the world, as well as a preparation for students to pursue their studies in overseas. Hence, I restate that learning unfamiliar language is necessary and useful for many aspects.
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IELTS essay Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. 37

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
362 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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