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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. You should write at least 250words. v. 44

Only ministries and big organizations can enhance the ecosystem, citizens cannot do anything. I totally disagree with this view because every taxpayer can participate charity work organized by non-profit foundations as well as they can keep their local community clean and inspire a new generation. The first reason why I disagree with only government can improve the environment is that a concern and alert individual may join a volunteer job to have a sustainable living place. There are lots of events all around the year regarding tree plantation, banning of plastic products and reservations of natural habitat. People can participate in these by planting a new tree, using fibre bags and not killing any endanger species. For example, in 2017, local communities in West Bengal State announced that they will not use any polyethylene products and they will not allow anyone to use them. They had found the positive outcome next year monsoon when there was no blockage in the sewerage and drainage and it had prevented them from flooding. However, a help from the central cabinet will inspire such community to do such work in a big prospect. Individuals can start to keep their home and are surrounding areas knit and clean by categorizing different types of wastes and throwing it in the proper bins. There are some countries where individuals are so careless to throw wastes on the road and the market place. For instance, most of the Bangladeshi people do not know how to use recycle bins. If you go to the capital Dhaka, you will smell bad odour even at the entrance of a big shopping mall. Besides, If Bangladeshi residents were cautions about pollution, Bangladesh would get a clean capital and much living place. Nevertheless, the Bangladesh government has invested a lot of money to keep their city clean, but not getting enough help from their people. In conclusion, every person has a their won liability to keep their society pollution free and government cannot do it alone without the participate of its taxpayers. It is predicted that in the future parliaments, cabinets, big organizations and people will work together to have a beautiful living planet Earth.

IELTS essay Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250words. v.44

Only
ministries and
big
organizations can enhance the ecosystem, citizens cannot do anything. I
totally
disagree with this view
because
every taxpayer can participate charity work organized by non-profit foundations
as well
as they can
keep
their local community clean and inspire a new generation. The
first
reason why I disagree with
only
government
can
improve
the environment is that a concern and alert individual may
join
a volunteer job to have a sustainable living place. There are lots of
events
all around the year regarding tree plantation, banning of plastic products and reservations of natural habitat.
People
can participate in these by planting a new tree, using
fibre
bags and not killing any endanger species.
For example
, in 2017, local communities in West Bengal State announced that they will not
use
any polyethylene
products and
they will not
allow
anyone to
use
them. They had found the
positive
outcome
next
year monsoon when there was no blockage in the sewerage and drainage and it had
prevented
them from flooding.
However
, a
help
from the central cabinet will inspire such community to do such work in a
big
prospect. Individuals can
start
to
keep
their home and are surrounding areas knit and clean by categorizing
different
types of wastes and throwing it in the proper bins. There are
some
countries where individuals are
so
careless to throw wastes on the road and the market place.
For instance
, most of the Bangladeshi
people
do not know how to
use
recycle bins. If you go to the capital Dhaka, you will smell
bad
odour
even at the entrance of a
big
shopping mall.
Besides
, If Bangladeshi residents were cautions about pollution, Bangladesh would
get
a clean capital and much living place.
Nevertheless
, the Bangladesh
government
has invested
a lot of
money to
keep
their city clean,
but
not getting
enough
help
from their
people
.
In conclusion
, every person has
a their won
liability to
keep
their society pollution free and
government
cannot do it alone without
the participate
of its taxpayers. It
is predicted
that in the future parliaments, cabinets,
big
organizations and
people
will work together to have a
beautiful
living planet Earth.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
4 paragraphs
362 words
9
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