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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250words. v.44

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. You should write at least 250words. v. 44
Only ministries and big organizations can enhance the ecosystem, citizens cannot do anything. I totally disagree with this view because every taxpayer can participate charity work organized by non-profit foundations as well as they can keep their local community clean and inspire a new generation. The first reason why I disagree with only government can improve the environment is that a concern and alert individual may join a volunteer job to have a sustainable living place. There are lots of events all around the year regarding tree plantation, banning of plastic products and reservations of natural habitat. People can participate in these by planting a new tree, using fibre bags and not killing any endanger species. For example, in 2017, local communities in West Bengal State announced that they will not use any polyethylene products and they will not allow anyone to use them. They had found the positive outcome next year monsoon when there was no blockage in the sewerage and drainage and it had prevented them from flooding. However, a help from the central cabinet will inspire such community to do such work in a big prospect. Individuals can start to keep their home and are surrounding areas knit and clean by categorizing different types of wastes and throwing it in the proper bins. There are some countries where individuals are so careless to throw wastes on the road and the market place. For instance, most of the Bangladeshi people do not know how to use recycle bins. If you go to the capital Dhaka, you will smell bad odour even at the entrance of a big shopping mall. Besides, If Bangladeshi residents were cautions about pollution, Bangladesh would get a clean capital and much living place. Nevertheless, the Bangladesh government has invested a lot of money to keep their city clean, but not getting enough help from their people. In conclusion, every person has a their won liability to keep their society pollution free and government cannot do it alone without the participate of its taxpayers. It is predicted that in the future parliaments, cabinets, big organizations and people will work together to have a beautiful living planet Earth.
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Only
ministries and
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big
organizations can enhance the ecosystem, citizens cannot do anything. I
totally
disagree with this view
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because
every taxpayer can participate charity work organized by non-profit foundations
as well
as they can
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keep
their local community
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clean
and inspire a new generation.

The
first
reason why I disagree with
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only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the environment is that a concern and alert individual may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
a volunteer job to have a sustainable living place. There are lots of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
all around the year regarding tree plantation, banning of plastic products and reservations of natural habitat.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
can participate in these by planting a new tree, using
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fibre
bags and not killing any endanger species.
For example
, in 2017, local communities in West Bengal State announced that they will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
any polyethylene
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
products and
they will not
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allow
anyone to
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use
them. They had found the
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positive
outcome
next
year monsoon when there was no blockage in the sewerage and drainage and it had
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prevented
them from flooding.
However
, a
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help
from the central cabinet will inspire such community to do such work in a
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big
prospect.

Individuals can
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start
to
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keep
their home and are surrounding areas knit and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
clean
by categorizing
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different
types of wastes and throwing it in the proper bins. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
countries where individuals are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
careless to throw wastes on the road and the market place.
For instance
, most of the Bangladeshi
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
do not know how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
recycle bins. If you go to the capital Dhaka, you will smell
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bad
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odour
even at the entrance of a
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big
shopping mall.
Besides
, If Bangladeshi residents were cautions about pollution, Bangladesh would
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get
a
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clean
capital and much living place.
Nevertheless
, the Bangladesh
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government
has invested
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a lot of
money to
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keep
their city
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clean
,
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but
not getting
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enough
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help
from their
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people
.

In conclusion
, every person has
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a their won
liability to
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keep
their society pollution free and
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government
cannot do it alone without
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'participate' is correct. If 'participate' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the participate
of its taxpayers. It
is predicted
that in the future parliaments, cabinets,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
big
organizations and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
will work together to have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
living planet Earth.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
A foreign language is like a frail, delicate muscle. If you do not use it, it weakens.
Jhumpa Lahiri

IELTS essay Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. You should write at least 250words. v. 44

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
362 words
9
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 9.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 9.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 9.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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