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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.18

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. v. 18
Different ways of Improving the environment are becoming an incredibly heated topic these days. Some people think that individuals cannot do much to enhance the surrounding environment, they believe that this role could only be carried out by governments and big premises. this essay will argue why this is extremely inaccurate. It is indeed a huge responsibility to upgrade the environment that could be justifiably believed to be only possible through the governmental institutions and private-sector companies. It is logical to think that environmental changes for the better are not easy unless there is huge financial support, which could be only made feasible by means of the government as well as other financially stable companies. For instance, In 2009 Microsoft has donated over 2 billion dollars to help with creating new recycling approaches all over the world that would greatly benefit the environment. It is for these reasons some researchers think it is more realistic to say that environmental improvement is not an only complex process, but also an expensive one and needs a higher governmental support or at least another major corporation. Despite these challenges, environmental improvement doesn’t always Need such resources. Individuals can help with that too. Although only very simple attitudes could be followed by people, yet they would have a great impact on the way towards enhancing the environment. for example, in Japan many simple techniques have been tried by the population that lead to effective recycling improvements that would have been otherwise impossible if only relied on the government. Therefore, it’s easy to believe that more can be done by each individual to improve our environment. To conclude, while it’s believed that governmental and other huge institutions are the only ones who could help with environmental upgrade, it’s still a hope that all individuals could help as well. This essay argued why it’s ultimately preposterous to think that environmental improvement is only relevant if the government or other big companies are involved. In my opinion, I absolutely disagree that individuals can do nothing about that too.
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Different
ways of Improving the
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environment
are becoming an
incredibly
heated topic these days.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
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think
that
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individuals
cannot do much to enhance the surrounding
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environment
, they believe that this role could
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only
be carried
out by
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governments
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
premises.
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this
essay will argue why this is
extremely
inaccurate.

It is
indeed
a huge responsibility to upgrade the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
that could be
justifiably
believed to be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
only
possible through the governmental institutions and private-sector
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
. It is logical to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
that
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environmental
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
for the better are not easy unless there is huge financial support, which could be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
only
made feasible by means of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
as well
as other
financially
stable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
.

For instance
, In 2009 Microsoft has donated over 2 billion dollars to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
with creating new recycling approaches all over the world that would
greatly
benefit the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
. It is for these reasons
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
researchers
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think
it is more realistic to say that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
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improvement
is not an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
only
complex process,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
an expensive one and needs a higher governmental support or at least another major corporation.

Despite these challenges,
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environmental
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improvement
doesn’t always

Need such resources.

Individuals can
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help
with that too. Although
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only
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
simple attitudes could
be followed
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
,
yet
they would have a great impact on the way towards enhancing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
for
example, in Japan
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
simple techniques have
been tried
by the population that lead to effective recycling
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improvements
that would have been
otherwise
impossible if
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only
relied on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
.
Therefore
, it’s easy to believe that more can
be done
by each
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individual
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
our environment.

To conclude
, while it’s believed that governmental and other huge institutions are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
only
ones who could
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
upgrade, it’s
still
a hope that all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individuals
could
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
as well
. This essay argued why it’s
ultimately
preposterous to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
improvement
is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
only
relevant if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
or other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
are involved
. In my opinion, I
absolutely
disagree that
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individuals
can do nothing about that too.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. v. 18

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
341 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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