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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a big difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree. v.1

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a big difference. v. 1
Man and his environment are an entity, not one can do without the other. The topic of whether the government and big companies or individuals could make an impact in caring for the environment remains a very controversial issue. In my opinion, i stronlgy disagree with the notion that individuals cannot do anything to improve the environment, because the bulk of the work rests on the people, as they have the greatest ability to make a difference and enforce the rule of law. To begin with, individuals make up the government, coporations and the society at large. If each individual can care for and improve his or her own personal space and surroundings, then the world will be better for it. Furthermore, even though the government is responsible for environmental policies, it is the job of the people to follow and implement this policies, as well as to report deterents to the authorities. For instance, in Lagos, Nigeria, in 2017, a survey was carried out to discover how the state was able to reduce public disposal of waste. It was revealed that this act reduced by 70%, when the people of the community become vigilant and reported people who openly littered the environment to the appropriate authorities. This proves ttat the people are majorly responsible for the environment. Although some schools of thought can argue that large companies and the government, have the manpower, infrastructure and financial capability to improve the environment, their visions cannot be actualised if the people that constitute them do not have the same drive. In addition, it falls on individuals to want to make the world a better and clean space, not only for humans but for all living creatures as well. For example, little things like making sure the waste generated at work places, go to the proper recycling bins and ensuring that the company or organizations, whether publicly or privately owned, make use of ecofriendly products, makes a huge difference. In conclusion, the question of who is in the best position to make a difference to improve the state of the surroundings, is it the government, coporate bodies or individuals? Is becoming increasingly popular. I strongly disagree with the opinion that people can do nothing to improve the environment because they make up even the government and are the drivers of change.
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Man
and his
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environment
are an entity, not one can do without the other. The topic of whether the
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government
and
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big
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companies
or
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individuals
could
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make
an impact in caring for the
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environment
remains a
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very
controversial issue. In my opinion, i
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stronlgy
disagree with the notion that
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individuals
cannot do anything to
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improve
the
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environment
,
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because
the bulk of the work rests on the
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people
, as they have the greatest ability to
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make
a difference and enforce the
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rule
of law.

To
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begin
with,
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individuals
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make
up the
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government
,
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coporations
and the society at large. If each
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individual
can care for and
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improve
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his or her
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own
personal space and surroundings, then the world will be better for it.
Furthermore
,
even though
the
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government
is responsible for environmental policies, it is the job of the
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people
to follow and implement
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this
policies,
as well
as to report
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deterents
to the authorities.
For instance
, in Lagos, Nigeria, in 2017, a survey
was carried
out to discover how the state was able to
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reduce
public disposal of waste. It
was revealed
that this act
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reduced
by 70%, when the
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people
of the community become vigilant and reported
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people
who
openly
littered the
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environment
to the appropriate authorities. This proves
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ttat
the
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people
are
majorly
responsible for the environment.

Although
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some
schools of
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thought
can argue that large
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companies
and the
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government
, have the manpower, infrastructure and financial capability to
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improve
the
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environment
, their visions cannot be
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actualised
if the
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people
that constitute them do not have the same drive.
In addition
, it falls on
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individuals
to want to
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make
the world a better and clean space, not
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only
for humans
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but
for all living creatures
as well
.
For example
,
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little
things like making sure the waste generated at work places, go to the proper recycling bins and ensuring that the
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company
or organizations, whether
publicly
or
privately
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owned
,
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make
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use
of
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ecofriendly
products,
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makes
a huge difference.

In conclusion
, the question of who is in the best position to
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make
a difference to
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improve
the state of the surroundings, is it the
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government
,
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coporate
bodies or
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individuals
? Is becoming
increasingly
popular. I
strongly
disagree with the opinion that
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people
can do nothing to
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improve
the
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environment
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because
they
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make
up even the
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government
and are the drivers of
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change
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a big difference. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
389 words
6
Overall Band Score
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