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Independent Writing Task Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do? -Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wa v.1

Independent Writing Task Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do? -Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wa v. 1
Nowadays teachers paly a crucial role in society and it is of the great importance to respect them. In this respects, there is a great consensus among people who believe if the teachers make a mistake or say something incorrect, we should not interrupt them, but I do not think in this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, although some people believe that it is a kind of rude to intrrupt teachers while they are saying something wrong, I believe if we do not say anything we are not able to inform not only teacher but also students that the things has been said was not true. In other words, if we do not so, specially students will learn something wrong which will hurt their education. For example, I remeber when I was in highschool I took the physics course and one day our teacher made a mistake to write Newton equation, so at that time I interrupted her and informed her that she had missed a important part of equation. At that time, my teacher apprecited my carefulness and explained that had I not hint to that mistake, all the student would have been in a trouble to do their calculation. Therefore, this experience taught me that is better to interrupt teachers and correct their mistake. Second, it might be interesting but some teachers make a mistakes delibaretly to evaluate the students and understands that they give their full attention to the class. So, on the condition that the students do not interrupt and correct them, they will think that students are not concentrated enough, due to the fact that the students have not inderstood their mistake. As a matter of fact, my father is a teacher, he always says that he uses this trick to asses the students. I even experienced this matter, during my elementry school, our teacher used to say something wrong intentionally to understand which one us are more concentrated. By considering these issues, I would rather interrupt teachers, no matter how impolite this is. Finally, as has been mentioned above, I firmly believe that we should stop teachers while they make a mistake. Not only is it not rude, but also it help other students to not learn their courses wrongly and it is really important since some teachers use it as a interesting way to evaluate the knowledge and attention of students.
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in this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

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while they are saying
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that the things has
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which will hurt their education.
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when I was in
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highschool
I took the physics course and one day our
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teacher
made a
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mistake
to write Newton equation,
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so
at that time I interrupted her and informed her that she had missed
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part of equation. At that time, my
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apprecited
my carefulness and
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that had I not hint to that
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, all the
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student
would have been in a trouble to do their calculation.
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, this experience taught me
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better to
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teachers
and correct their mistake.

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teachers
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a
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to evaluate the
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students
and understands that they give their full attention to the
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class
.
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do not
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and correct them, they will
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that
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are not concentrated
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, due to the fact that the
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inderstood
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. As a matter of fact, my father is a
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, he always says that he
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this trick to asses the
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. I even experienced this matter, during my
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school, our
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to understand which one us are more concentrated. By considering these issues, I would
rather
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interrupt
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, no matter how impolite this is.

Finally
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that we should
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while they
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. Not
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is it not rude,
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to not learn their courses
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since
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41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS essay Independent Writing Task Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do? -Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wa v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
409 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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