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a/d always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2

a/d always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
Human is social animal. Society is based on relations among people. Relations are very difficult to maintain. They are very delicate, so people have to handle them very carefully. As a result, according to me telling the truth is the most important consideration to enhance any relationship between people. Firstly, truth helps to avoid problems. For instance, I am Thalassemia minor candidate. It is a disorder of blood, where the Red blood cells are defective. So, victim suffers from low hemoglobin through out life. So, I decided to tell the truth to my fiance. It very critical to make sure that he does not have this problem. If both of us are having this medical disease then there are 25% chances that we will have Thalassemia major child. Children with this disorder suffer from lack of blood and their life span is hardly 20-25 years. So, in such situation being honest will help to avoid sensitive problem. Moreover, It helps to build reputation and to strengthen the relationships. Telling truth helps to win the confidence of others, so, people will trust you. It is very important to be honest about your work on job. That helps to nurture the relations among staff members. It eliminates the unhealthy competition among employees. It maintains the transparency. So, it helps to overcome the hurdles for success. Additionally, If we tell truth, we do not have to remember the wrong manipulated matter. So, we feel stress free. Which secrets hormones like Enkephalin and Endorphin. They are responsible to create positive mood. We can work with better efficiency and increases productivity. So, we enjoy doing business, chores, leisure activities and many more. As the stress decreases, it helps to maintain relations in healthier way. In conclusion, telling truth has many direct and indirect advantages on peoples lives. Sometime you may end up with a problem by telling truth but it is always negligible. Honesty is best policy and it is key for successful relationship.
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relations
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people
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are
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very
difficult to maintain. They are
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very
delicate,
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so
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people
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have to
handle them
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very
carefully
.
As a result
, according to me
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telling
the
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truth
is the most
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important
consideration to enhance any relationship between
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people
.

Firstly
,
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truth
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helps
to avoid problems.
For instance
, I am
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Thalassemia
minor candidate. It is a disorder of blood, where the Red blood cells are defective.
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So
, victim suffers from low hemoglobin
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through out
life.
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So
, I decided to
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tell
the
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truth
to my
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fiance
.
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It
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very
critical to
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make
sure that he does not have this problem. If both of us are having this medical disease then there are 25% chances that we will have
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Thalassemia
major child. Children with this disorder suffer from lack of blood and their life span is hardly 20-25 years.
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So
, in such situation being honest will
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help
to avoid sensitive problem.

Moreover
, It
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helps
to build reputation and to strengthen the relationships.
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Telling
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truth
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helps
to win the confidence of others,
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so
,
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people
will trust you. It is
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very
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important
to be honest about your work on job. That
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helps
to nurture the
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relations
among staff members. It eliminates the unhealthy competition among employees. It maintains the transparency.
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So
, it
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helps
to overcome the hurdles for success.

Additionally
, If we
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tell
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truth
, we do not
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have to
remember the
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wrong
manipulated matter.
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So
, we feel
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stress
free. Which secrets hormones like
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Enkephalin
and Endorphin. They are responsible to create
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positive
mood. We can work with better efficiency and increases productivity.
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So
, we enjoy doing business, chores, leisure activities and
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many
more. As the
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stress
decreases, it
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helps
to maintain
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relations
in healthier way.

In conclusion
,
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telling
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truth
has
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many
direct and indirect advantages on
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peoples
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lives
. Sometime you may
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end
up with a problem by
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telling
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truth
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but
it is always negligible. Honesty
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is best
policy and it is key for successful relationship.
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26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay a/d always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
329 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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