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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? v.7

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do you think might be effective? v. 7
For some time now, growing traffic and ever so increasing pollution because of it has been a terrible issue to deal with. While increasing the price of fuel is surely one way to curb the problem, there are some other effective solutions to deal with it including imposing fines and allowing only the CNG operated vehicles to ply. This essay will discuss why I completely agree with the idea of raising the petrol prices to reduce the problems of traffic and pollution. An increment in the fuel prices will surely keep a check on the ever so growing traffic. Raising the petroleum prices would surely mean that there would be a decline in the sales of motor vehicles, thereby reducing the amount of traffic and therefore, less release of pollution in the atmosphere which otherwise, pose a serious threat to the health of the citizens. For instance, in France, the government authorities there have increased the fuel prices by around 15 percent to deal with the raging traffic problem and to their peoples' delight, a significant reduction in the traffic has been observed in comparison to the past ten years' data. So, it is a compelling reason why increasing the fuel prices can be a definite way to curb the issue of traffic and pollution. On the contrary, there can be some other ways to deal with the difficulty of traffic and pollution. Firstly, imposing heavy fines on the vehicles not having a valid pollution certificate would certainly persuade the vehicle owners to give a serious thought to get the same done. For example, in China, that has seen a huge spike in the amount of traffic and a big increase in the pollution levels, has recently passed a law to levy a hefty fine of thousand YEN on the offenders of riding non-pollution certified vehicles on roads. Secondly, allowing only the CNG operated four-wheelers, which release nearly 25 percent less pollution than the traditional fuel operated ones, to ply would do the needful. To illustrate, in the USA, today, only CNG operated vehicle owners are given a permit to drive on the roads, thus becoming the least polluted country in the world, acording to a recent survey. Therefore, these measures can surely be considered when it comes to curbing traffic and pollution levels. This essay argued why I completely agree with the idea of raising the fuel prices to put a restraint on the increasing levels of traffic and smoke. Notwithstanding this, there can be some other ways to deal with the issue.
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to curb the problem, there are
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other effective solutions to
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with it including imposing fines and allowing
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the CNG
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operated
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vehicles
to
ply
. This essay will discuss why I completely
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with the
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idea
of raising the petrol
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prices
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traffic
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will
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growing
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. Raising the petroleum
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mean that there would be a decline in the sales of motor
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vehicles
, thereby reducing the amount of
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traffic
and
therefore
, less release of
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pollution
in the atmosphere which
otherwise
, pose a serious threat to the health of the citizens.
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, in France, the
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government
authorities there have increased the
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fuel
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prices
by around 15 percent to
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deal
with the raging
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traffic
problem and to their peoples' delight, a significant reduction in the
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traffic
has
been observed
in comparison
to the past ten years' data.
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, it is a compelling reason why
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increasing
the
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prices
can be a
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definite
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way
to curb the issue of
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traffic
and pollution.

On the contrary
, there can be
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other
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ways
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and
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pollution
.
Firstly
, imposing heavy fines on the
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vehicles
not having a valid
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certificate would
certainly
persuade the
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vehicle
owners to give a serious
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, in China, that has
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seen
a huge spike in the amount of
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traffic
and a
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big
increase in the
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pollution
levels, has recently passed a law to levy a hefty fine of thousand YEN on the offenders of riding non-pollution certified
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vehicles
on roads.
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, allowing
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only
the CNG
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operated
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four-wheelers
, which release
nearly
25 percent less
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pollution
than the traditional
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fuel
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operated
ones, to
ply
would do the needful. To illustrate, in the USA,
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,
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CNG
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given
a permit to drive on the roads,
thus
becoming the least polluted country in the world,
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acording
to a recent survey.
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, these measures can
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surely
be considered
when it
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comes
to curbing
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traffic
and
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pollution
levels.

This essay argued why I completely
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agree
with the
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idea
of raising the
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fuel
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prices
to put a restraint on the
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increasing
levels of
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traffic
and smoke. Notwithstanding this, there can be
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some
other
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ways
to
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deal
with the issue.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
58Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do you think might be effective? v. 7

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
424 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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