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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? v.30

The increased use of vehicles causes traffic congestion and pollution. However I oppose the view that by uplifting the price of petrol could solve this issue to a certain extent. In this essay I deal with the reasons for my opinion and discuss other measures to tackle this problem. First of all, in this modern world people depend on private vehicles more for travelling. It helps them from the inconvenience of public transportation. Therefore they never mind the petroleum price. For example, developing countries like India, the price of petrol increasing day by day basis. But still huge number of people using own vehicles especially working professionals and traffic and pollution are high in cities such as Delhi. So petrol price have less impact on these issues. I recommend two other measures to reduce pollution and traffic. Firstly, encourage production of electric vehicles. If people get electric vehicles at a low price, they would definitely use it. Secondly, government should improve facilities in public transportation. When more people travel in public buses, traffic problem resolve simultaneously. By these measures we can reduce pollution and traffic. In conclusion, increasing petrol value is not the best method to diminish pollution and traffic congestion. electric vehicles and improved public transportation are the best ways to solve this issue.
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causes
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congestion and
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pollution
.
However
I oppose the view that by uplifting the
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price
of
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petrol
could solve this issue to a certain extent. In this essay I deal with the reasons for my opinion and discuss other measures to tackle this problem.

First
of all, in this modern world
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people
depend on private
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vehicles
more for travelling. It
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helps
them from the inconvenience of
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public
transportation.
Therefore
they never mind the petroleum
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price
.
For example
,
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developing countries
like India, the
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price
of
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petrol
increasing day by day basis.
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still
huge number of
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people
using
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especially
working professionals and
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traffic
and
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pollution
are high in cities such as Delhi.
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So
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petrol
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have less impact on these issues.

I recommend two other measures to
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reduce
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pollution
and
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traffic
.
Firstly
, encourage production of electric
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vehicles
. If
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people
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get
electric
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vehicles
at a low
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price
, they would definitely
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use
it.
Secondly
,
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should
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facilities in
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transportation. When more
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people
travel in
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public
buses,
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problem resolve
simultaneously
. By these measures we can
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reduce
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pollution
and traffic.

In conclusion
, increasing
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petrol
value is not the best method to diminish
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pollution
and
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traffic
congestion. electric
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vehicles
and
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improved
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public
transportation are the best ways to solve this issue.
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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