Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? v.25
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do you think might be effective? v. 25
Nowadays, playing a good role in society is an essential and hard progress. Many say that children should be taught by their parents about how to become a good part of the public. Though, other people, including myself, believe that school is the best place of the teaching of being a good individual in humanity.
Firstly, parents have a huge and important role in this process. They have to pay attention to their children's behaviour, because behaviour is an extremely essential part of being friendly. For example, everyday children's smartphones should be checked by the parents to know what their children are doing. As well as, parents have to reduce the amount of time, which is wasting by video games, TV and the Internet. Instead, parents need to allow their children to play outside together with friends. Another option is organising family gatherings where children can be closer to his or her relatives. Because everything starts from the family.
Furthermore, the school also takes part in this process. Because, the first culture which children face is their classmates, teachers and school after the family. So, if they learn to be a good person in this kind of small community, they will not be distracted during their upcoming lifetime. For instance, team-working facilities in classes are really high. In there, children test different characters and then they know how to communicate with a variety of people. It is also beneficial for their future job. Also, studying subjects is also necessary for a sociable person. As I myself practised, reading books much can automatically improve the social skills of an individual.
In conclusion, this hard progress, by all means, contains the school atmosphere, however, parent's attention can be the second thing for becoming friendly or sociable.
Nowadays, playing a
good
role in society is an essential and
hard
progress.
Many
say that
children
should
be taught
by their
parents
about how to become a
good
part of the public. Though, other
people
, including myself, believe that
school
is the best place of the teaching of being a
good
individual in humanity.
Firstly
,
parents
have a huge and
important
role in this process. They
have to
pay attention to their children's
behaviour
,
because
behaviour
is an
extremely
essential part of being friendly.
For example
, everyday children's smartphones should be
checked
by the
parents
to know what their
children
are doing.
As well
as,
parents
have to
reduce
the amount of time, which is wasting by video games, TV and the Internet.
Instead
,
parents
need to
allow
their
children
to play outside together with friends. Another option is
organising
family gatherings where
children
can be closer to
his or her
relatives.
Because
everything
starts
from the family.
Furthermore
, the
school
also
takes part
in this process.
Because
, the
first
culture which
children
face is their classmates, teachers and
school
after the family.
So
, if they learn to be a
good
person in this kind of
small
community, they will not
be distracted
during their upcoming lifetime.
For instance
, team-working facilities in classes are
really
high. In there,
children
test
different
characters and
then they know how to communicate with a variety of
people
. It is
also
beneficial for their future job.
Also
, studying subjects is
also
necessary for a sociable person. As I myself
practised
, reading books much can
automatically
improve
the social
skills
of an individual.
In conclusion
, this
hard
progress, by all means, contains the
school
atmosphere,
however
, parent's attention can be the second thing for becoming friendly or sociable.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes