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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? v.26

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do you think might be effective? v. 26
Increase in automobiles leads to environmental and traffic problems. The rise in petrol price is the best way to solve all the problems. I completely disagree with this statement However, this essay will discuss about the other factors that might be effective. Firstly, When the cost of petrol is increased dramatically then the people will suffer economically. People will prefer to travel more in public transport other than their own vehicles Furthermore, there will be a huge demand for public transportation. Although it can control the traffic problems but due to limited transportation people cannot able to reach their destination in time. For instance, Because of less travel services people who are going to their work, college, or school will suffer. So, people cannot able to reach their work places in time. The people who depend on their own vehicles will be affected by the increase in petrol price. Secondly, There are many other measures to be taken to solve these problems. The solutions for environment pollution is that by replacing Petrol, Diesel vehicles and buses or other automobiles by electric vehicles. For example, electric vehicles can limit the consumption of fossil fuels and using bicycles for the shorter distances. Parents should encourage their children to walk instead of using automobiles for travelling to near places. Government and other authorities should run a campaign to spread awareness of environmental pollution. Apart from that, many organisations should give seminars in schools and colleges on conservation of fossil fuels. To conclude, the rise in petrol bill is not the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. Many other measures can also be taken to solve these problems. Electric vehicles and using limited amount of fossil fuels can solve the environmental problems. The government should implement strict rules against the usage of fossil fuels and traffic problems. Apart from that, parents must restrict the usage of motor vehicles to their children.
Increase in automobiles leads to environmental and
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traffic
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problems
. The rise in
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petrol
price is the best way to
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solve
all the
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problems
. I completely disagree with this statement
However
, this essay will
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discuss about the
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other
factors that might be effective.

Firstly
, When the cost of
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petrol
is increased
dramatically
then the
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people
will suffer
economically
.
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People
will prefer to travel more in public transport
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other
than their
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own
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vehicles
Furthermore
, there will be a huge demand for public transportation. Although it can control the
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traffic
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problems
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but
due to limited transportation
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people
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cannot able
to reach their destination in time.
For instance
,
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Because
of less travel services
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people
who are going to their work, college, or school will suffer.
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So
,
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people
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cannot able
to reach their work places in time. The
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people
who depend on their
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own
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vehicles
will be
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affected
by the increase in
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petrol
price.

Secondly
, There are
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many
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other
measures to
be taken
to
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solve
these
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problems
. The solutions for environment pollution is that by replacing
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Petrol
, Diesel
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vehicles
and buses or
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other
automobiles by electric
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vehicles
.
For example
, electric
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vehicles
can limit the consumption of
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fossil
fuels and using bicycles for the shorter distances. Parents should encourage their children to walk
instead
of using automobiles for travelling to near places.
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Government
and
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other
authorities should run a campaign to spread awareness of environmental pollution. Apart from that,
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many
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organisations
should give seminars in schools and colleges on conservation of
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fossil
fuels.

To conclude
, the rise in
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petrol
bill is not the best way to
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solve
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traffic
and pollution
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problems
.
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Many
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other
measures can
also
be taken
to
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solve
these
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problems
. Electric
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vehicles
and using limited amount of
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fossil
fuels can
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solve
the environmental
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problems
. The
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government
should implement strict
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rules
against the usage of
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fossil
fuels and
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traffic
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problems
. Apart from that, parents
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must
restrict the usage of motor
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vehicles
to their children.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do you think might be effective? v. 26

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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