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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures doyou think might be effective? v.10

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures doyou think might be effective? v. 10
The most effective way to solve traffic and pollution problems is raising the price of petrol. This essay disagrees with that expensive petrol is the best way to solve these problems because we should combine many solutions, especially development in good public transport. When petrol is expensive, many people try to find the new energy for the vehicle, but commuters still use the private car in everyday life that makes the traffic and pollution problems also appear. Expensive petrol cannot make people reduce using a private car. Terrible traffic in Bangkok, for instance, every morning and evening a lot of people have to spend many hours on the road whether petrol price increase or not. Many people in Bangkok feel it convenient when they use their own car more than get low-quality public transport services, even if petrol is expensive. Effective public transport can solve traffic and pollution problems by reducing the number of cars using. Usually, people like to travel in an easier way and arrival on time. If in the city have enough train stations and many buses, most people will turn to use public transport and private cars will not necessarily. For example, Singapore is the country where have many railways from a city centre to other residential areas with a lot of interchange stations in their train system, and also have many bus routes in the whole areas. These public transport can reduce the traffic problem and pollutions in their city. In conclusion, the petrol price is not the only cause of traffic and pollution problems so increasing its price is not the best solution. In my opinion, these problems should solve by developing public transport systems and using many solutions together.
The most effective way to
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solve
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traffic
and
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pollution
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problems
is raising the
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price
of
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petrol
. This essay disagrees with that expensive
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petrol
is the best way to
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solve
these
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problems
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because
we should combine
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many
solutions,
especially
development in
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good
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public
transport.

When
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petrol
is expensive,
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many
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people
try to find the new energy for the vehicle,
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but
commuters
still
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use
the private
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car
in everyday life that
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makes
the
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traffic
and
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pollution
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problems
also
appear. Expensive
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petrol
cannot
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make
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people
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reduce
using a private
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car
. Terrible
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traffic
in Bangkok,
for instance
, every morning and evening
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a lot of
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people
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have to
spend
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many
hours on the road whether
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petrol
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price
increase or not.
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people
in Bangkok feel it convenient when they
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use
their
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own
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car
more than
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get
low-quality
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public
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transport
services, even if
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petrol
is expensive.

Effective
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public
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transport
can
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solve
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traffic
and
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pollution
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problems
by reducing the number of
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cars
using.
Usually
,
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people
like to travel in an easier way and arrival on time. If in the city have
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enough
train stations and
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many
buses, most
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people
will turn to
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use
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public
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transport
and private
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cars
will not
necessarily
.
For example
, Singapore is the country where have
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many
railways from a city
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centre
to other residential areas with
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a lot of
interchange stations in their train system, and
also
have
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many
bus routes in the whole areas. These
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public
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transport
can
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reduce
the
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traffic
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problem
and
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pollutions
in their city.

In conclusion
, the
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petrol
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price
is not the
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only
cause of
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traffic
and
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pollution
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problems
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so
increasing its
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price
is not the best solution. In my opinion, these
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problems
should
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solve
by developing
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public
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transport
systems and using
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many
solutions together.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
55Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures doyou think might be effective? v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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