Many people believe that nowadays many global cities have several problems are from increasing car usage. In my point of view, it is hard to concur to such claims. Therefore, in the following paragraphs there are persuasive reasons to discuss this issue in depth.
First of all, the main reason to support my position is that there are other ways to solve the difficulties. Take Melbourne for example, a few years ago, they reduced the price of taking trains. In order to encourage people to use public transportation more often instead of driving cars. By this way, it not only help people save money from travelling, but also improve the situation of environmental pollution. Such as traffic jams or air pollution. For this example, it demonstrates that avoiding personal vehicles is not the only method for the cities to solve the problems.
Another reason for my belief is that driving vehicles is not the main reason for the issues of cities. For instance, my professor told us some of the major cities in Taiwan suffered from PM2. 5. Hence, the government requested the factories nearby to shut down for weeks. As a result, they do improve their environment. Consequently, it can be said that the problems we have may not be solved by banning vehicles.
To conclude, there is not to say that the project of banning private vehicles is totally without merit. Nonetheless, it may increase other issues. The government should figure out better ways to help the issues or they may need to discover the real reasons of the difficulties.
Many
people
believe that nowadays
many
global
cities
have several problems are from increasing car usage. In my point of view, it is
hard
to concur to such claims.
Therefore
, in the following paragraphs there are persuasive
reasons
to discuss this
issue
in depth.
First of all
, the main
reason
to support my position is that there are other ways to solve the difficulties. Take Melbourne
for example
, a few years ago, they
reduced
the price of taking trains. In order to encourage
people
to
use
public transportation more
often
instead
of driving cars. By this way, it not
only
help
people
save money from travelling,
but
also
improve
the situation of environmental pollution. Such as traffic jams or air pollution. For this example, it demonstrates that avoiding personal vehicles is not the
only
method for the
cities
to solve the problems.
Another
reason
for my belief is that driving vehicles is not the main
reason
for the
issues
of
cities
.
For instance
, my professor
told
us
some of the
major
cities
in Taiwan suffered from PM2. 5.
Hence
, the
government
requested the factories nearby to shut down for weeks.
As a result
, they do
improve
their environment.
Consequently
, it can
be said
that the problems we have may not
be solved
by banning vehicles.
To conclude
, there is not to say that the project of banning private vehicles is
totally
without merit. Nonetheless, it may increase other
issues
. The
government
should figure out better ways to
help
the
issues or
they may need to discover the real
reasons
of the difficulties.
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