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Increasing car usage in many large global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the city centre. To what extent do you agree? v.1

Increasing car usage in many large global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the city centre. v. 1
Cities are characterized with lots of cars use probably due to increased industrialization in the environment. Some governments are looking into reducing the quantity of vehicles on the major city roads by using some measures such as restricting certain vehicle type in some areas. This essay agrees to the measure which bans the use of private cars from the city centres. Increased cars on urban roads have contributed greatly to road traffic. People get late to work in the morning and likewise get home late. In Lagos for instance, routes to industrialized areas are usually traffic intensified. This traffic in turn has increased pollution, such as noise and air pollution. Vehicles horn indiscriminately because drivers are in a haste. Several cars on the highway increase the quantity of carbon monoxide released into the environment. After getting to work, despite the traffic, people are faced with the problem of parking their motors. Some park by the roadside or walkway. This further obstructs the flow of traffic for road users and sidewalks. Road traffic and parking are also known to encourage robbery in some cities like Lagos. Hoodlums break car windows and take peoples' belongings. Can governments' plan to ban private vehicles from city centres make a major difference? Yes, it can, thereby making highways less busy and walk areas free. Road flows properly while pollution level is reduced. Theft rates falls since vehicles will move at a steady speed. Individuals have the options of public or company buses to convey them to such areas. Ferry use or cycling could be better options too if applicable. In conclusion, the implementation of this policy will go a long way in decongesting the major urban roads. Economic activities, citizens' and environmental health will feel this positive impact.
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cars
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use
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Some
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governments
are looking into reducing the quantity of
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vehicles
on the major city
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roads
by using
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some
measures such as restricting certain
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vehicle
type in
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some
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areas
. This essay
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agrees
to the measure which bans the
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use
of private
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cars
from the city
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centres
.

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cars
on urban
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roads
have contributed
greatly
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road
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.
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People
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late to work in the morning and
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home late. In Lagos
for instance
, routes to industrialized
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are
usually
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traffic
intensified. This
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traffic
in turn has increased pollution, such as noise and air pollution.
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Vehicles
horn
indiscriminately
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because
drivers are in a haste. Several
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cars
on the highway increase the quantity of carbon monoxide released into the environment. After getting to work, despite the
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traffic
,
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people
are faced
with the problem of parking their motors.
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Some
park by the roadside or walkway. This
further
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traffic
for
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road
users and sidewalks.
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Road
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traffic
and parking are
also
known to encourage robbery in
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some
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cities
like Lagos. Hoodlums break
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car
windows and take peoples' belongings.

Can
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governments
' plan to ban private
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vehicles
from city
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centres
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make
a major difference? Yes, it can, thereby making highways less busy and walk
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areas
free.
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Road
flows
properly
while pollution level is
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reduced
. Theft rates falls since
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vehicles
will
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move
at a steady speed. Individuals have the options of public or
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company
buses to convey them to such
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areas
. Ferry
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use
or cycling could be better options too if applicable.

In conclusion
, the implementation of this policy will go a long way in decongesting the major urban
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roads
. Economic activities, citizens' and environmental health will feel this
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positive
impact.
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29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Language is the road map of a culture. It tells you where its people come from and where they are going.
Rita Mae Brown

IELTS essay Increasing car usage in many large global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the city centre. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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